Eye of the Pie

by crashlanding12

Last Chapter

The couple flew to Soarin’s cloud mansion; Soarin’ walking in first making sure Spitfire was not there. Thankfully, the coast was clear.

The two were sitting on the couch nuzzling each other when a knock was on the door. Soarin’ got up to answer the door. It was Fluttershy.

“Oh, was I interrupting anything?”

“No. No.”

“What do you want, Fluttershy?” said Rainbow, from the couch.

“Well, I need your help with something.”

“Okay, I’ll help you.”
Rainbow got up from the couch and went with Fluttershy.

While the two disappeared, Soarin’ sat there thinking about what the two pegasi were talking about: Where they talking about me?

Finally, Rainbow got back.

“So, what did you talk about?”

“It’s none of your business.”

Soarin’ yawned and closed his eyes and was in the middle of being awake and asleep.

“Soarin’, can I ask you a question?”

Soarin’ opened one of his eyes and turned to Rainbow.

“What?”

“Are we, um, dating?”

“If you want us to be.”

The two got closer, and shared a long kiss.

THE END

Comments

[Platnium]

I personally enjoyed this while others apparently didn't. But I just have to say, Keep writing. Don't ever give up.

[crashlanding12]

You are so awesome!!!

[rainbowscratch27]

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase make more

[crashlanding12]

Do you guys mind if I make a fanfic with my OC?

[Ironfire Skies]

Great job!!! For this chapter, it's a little too short, didn't not really mention that much detail.

[Green Ween]

Awwwwwww so cute