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After pulling a stunt at the local radio station, Vinyl Scratch gets both herself and her marefriend/co-worker Octatvia fired, desperate to make ends meet she searches for a new job before running into The Doctor.


Vinyl suggests trying their luck at the slots in Las Pegasus (much to Octavia’s chagrin)-in the fifties to recoup their loss of salary.

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This is kinda odd, as it feels like it has one or two plot threads hanging at the end. As well the Doctor's mood feels a bit whiplash, one minute he's fine, the next he's snapping at them.

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Thank you for the constructive criticism.

I was sick when I wrote this for a contest, when I really should have been resting.

So I apologize for the rushed and incomplete story, I am going through it now and making changes and edits to explain things better.

His snapping was probably my agitation with being sick hurting my chances of getting 31 decent stories submitted before October 31st.

3472792 Aww, it's still a cool fic and doubly so knowing you wrote it while under the weather!

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