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Good authors too, who once knew better words, Now only use four-letter words writing prose. Anything goes. :raritywink:


This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves: Mark Of The Mara

Cover art by SOARINDASH1

The Second Temptation of a Time Lord

The Doctor takes the Coordinates Blue gave him, and lands in a massive Prison. Run by Eternal beings who simply call themselves "The Law." With a ruthless Judge, a sympathetic Warden, and many imprisoned ponies in pain.

Blue sent them here for a reason, and the Doctor may not be prepared for what he finds there.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 18 )

You can't say "see you in chapter 2" when you 1, don't see us at all, and 2, don't have chapter 2 out yet. That's like saying "see you nowhere" because chapter 2 doesn't exist yet, and since it does not exist yet, therefore, it cannot be anywhere, and until it does exist, chapter 2 is "nowhere".

So see you "nowhere", I suppose.


7663832 "See you next chapter," then, Mr. Persnickety.:ajbemused:

Yus. All this next to pointless drama to one ending conclusion that almost makes me want to strangle something until I see the next part. :twilightsmile:

Vinyl took care to shove a few guards down to the ground along the way.

Bwahaha! :rainbowlaugh:

"I daresay I have attracted their attention!" the Doctor laughed.

Indeed, and in a most glorious manner. :rainbowlaugh:

...Just what kind of a judicial system is this place?

Dipstick. I get it. Because you've been watching something about a Pine Tree, Shooting Star and other stuff.

That would have been bad enough, but then I did something. I thought. Frightful habit, I've been trying to kick it.

I believe I enjoyed this line far more than I have any right to. :derpytongue2:

"Doctor, have we been meeting out of order?" asked the Mara.

...I'm gonna need to write notes to keep track, aren't I?

I'm going to google Galilee now.
Because I can.

i have to be honest, i did not see that coming

Just a suggestion, but you should really mark some of you previous as finished.

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