• Member Since 29th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 29th, 2012

Hawk eye


I have no clue what I'm doing in the slightest! I just write whatever comes to mind, usually it isn't very good or cohesive but as long as no one swears a blood feud on my house I'm okay!

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Jack wakes up in ponyville after an attack on his battleship the Arizona. He makes it his mission to find out what happened, after he learns how to fly of course.

My first story advice is appreciated.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 5 )

That's an interesting picture. (Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy FTW)

Sounds like its going to be cool, I look forward to seeing where this goes.

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all i can say is
what?
i understood everything until the part when you got knocked out...then it was all just ???

288082

I was going for the kind of story told from his perspective so you'd only know what he knew but I'll try to explain better in later chapters.

288199
ooooohhhhh
even now....im still like
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