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Oh god, the ending. So dark and ominous .
Twilight will never be able to forgive herself, will she? Nero you devious devil you, you're a master at writing Dark Stories
This one was rather tense. I want more unsettling predicaments like this.
I already knew you guys would love this one.
By the way, does anyone know how to change the cover image?
Tried to update it, but it wouldnt let me
Maybe it takes some time,you cant delete a cover image sadly.
but this one is ok i would say.
and PLEASE DONT KILL SPIKE,he and rarity are the only somewhat canon romance pair so dont do it
loved this chapter,really intense and it gets just more and more complicated.
Makes you wonder what celestia plans,she certainly loves Twilight and wants to protect her,but is that enough to make sure Twilight and her friends wont be hurt for the "greater good"
Perfect. Intense and well written. The story just keeps getting better. This is how a Grimdark should always be, you are a master author. Now just to wait for the next chapter.
This was awesome.
Points for:
Vampire masquerade Obsidian
Repressed classmate feelings
Birth of evil monster
Saving the savior
EPIC cliffhanger.
Keep it up!
Bro, you get better and better with this with each chapter. Keep going!
You know, I don't think I get suspense, but you're still a really great author and the story drew me in like a fish on a line. I'm not exactly sure if this is grimdark or not, it seems rather lighthearted (at least, compared to others I enjoy), and there is one thing that I just LOVE about this story.
It doesn't matter whether Pinkie is "Cupcakes"-crazy, if she turns out not to be I'll find an e-book editor and remove all the bits after on my .mobi file. The simple fact that the insinuation is blindingly obvious, oh God, I just love those bits. I am also extremely interested in cannibal!. I mean, the cupcake-eating contest was just PERFECT. I have... no words. I also like how the Cakes mysteriously disappeared before Pinkie happens to have a large amount of "ingredient." This is probably my favorite Pinkie. (And Derpy) Please continue along in this vein.
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Thanks. But I think you are getting one thing wrong which I have to sort out to avoid confusion:
The Cakes did not disappear. I simply didn't write about them yet.
If Spike dies you sir are going to have to find a way to get him BACK
This was a great chapter but it was so long and I read so slow so it took me a few days to read because of sleeping and school and stuff
Aww shit!
Nooooooooooooo!!! Must. Have. More!
This story is so awsome and very well written, I can't wait for the next enstallment!
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That person would be me, since I write this story.
This just gets better and better, and notice how every pony that has gone insane now has in some way has connections to Twilight........
I know I shouldn't say this but, my thoughts on the last few sentances, BITCH GONNA GET RAPED!
Hi! You probably don't remember me, but I had dropped you some quite huge notes in the thread you had on Ponychan's /fic/. As I said there, I've been behind on the last few chapters, but considering I have a bit of time now, I'll start catching up. I won't really have time to concoct a proper review or anything though, but I can jot down a couple of notes while I'm reading and let you in on them, if it's okay. In any case, onwards!
I think I might just go insane myself! This is the most disturbing, dark, gruesome and weirdest story I ever read! ... And... I like it!
That was distrurbing.... I started to cry at the end where spike probably gets killed
2268812 Not sure of you're a wimp, or I'm sociopathic.
Welp.... Spike is soooo bucked.
RIP: spike
Can someone just off spike from the story. Because I have no way to care about what he says, thinks, or even is.
I mean, come on somebody
Errr I mean somePONY has got to agree on this I mean
He is seriously the biggest deadweight In the history of fiction at this point
Please spell owlicious correctly because jesus christ that particular misspelling is a trigger for me.
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To be perfectly correct, the mlp wiki page spells him Owlowiscious.
wow
Despair seems like a mixture of a Heartless and a Nobody in a more horrific and dark version but that's just my opinion
Obsidian, that was all types of stupid.
That's like telling a straight dude that he'll get used to havin' another man's meat in his bum; I mean, yeah he could get used to it but that doesn't mean hell like it.