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question are you going to have a good ending where twi just kills Obsidian before he looses control?
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It is not her intention to kill him, as already explained.
In all conclusions, she will try to find a way to rescue Obsidian.
Damn! This ending tore my heart into pieces! I liked the first ending better!
Why everypony has to die because of the decision of Twilight fighting Obsidian?
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Because this is exactly what the demons wanted.
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But there is one thing I expected to happen instead of this! After killing Malice or banishing her (whatever), Twilight should have gone insane and killed every reaper there is! Then she will be alone in the darkness! That way could be cooler really!
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Dont you think this chapter already contains enough insanity and gore?
I think I already went very far out by making Malice so powerful.
I believe the chapter is good as it is.
One red reaper and the end of the world is enough.
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Now now no need to be offended! I like your story and you're the author! I just stated my point of view and thought that maybe after seeing the world turn upside down into her, Twilight becomes evil and lonely!
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No worries. Am not offended.
Well that sure would be a way to make the story ultimately evil.
But I prefered to rather create a feeling of being doomed in the end.
Also, I wanted to display that Twilight truly has become much stronger due to surviving the tricks Despair pulled on her.
1249099 how can she still be so foolish after all she's been through?
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Hope dies last.
Despite the fact that this entire story was incredibly evil, depressing and had a strong feeling of doom over it, there always was a glimbse of hope.
Exactly this glimbse was what fuled this story and gave expectations for a somewhat good ending.
If I may quote Justine from Amnesia: Justine....
"Just remember! They can all be saved!
There is always a way."
1249204 wow that makes this event even more depressing. because there is no way obsidian could have been saved other than through the method he gave Twilight. I mean she should have seen this coming however she's too dense to realize that it was already too late to save obsidian from death she could still at least save his soul by slaying him with his own scythe. however she still believes their is time to save him from that fate. It's just a bit foolish if you think about it. anyway i understand the moral behind it anyway
cheers.
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I guess you are looking forward for the last conclusion, Letter of Destiny?
1249323 yes hopefully it isn't as depressing as the last one.
... Well, fuck...
...Dang...I had a feeling facing Obsidian would be a bad idea after reading 'Ringing Bells', but I didn't think it would be THIS bad. The prophecy has come true, and the end is near. All I have to say to Twilight is:...I feel ya, Twi; I feel ya.
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Now, I shall patiently await the third and final conclusion. I look forward to it.
GODDS ABOVE DAMN YOU TWILIGHT SPARKLE, THIS RUIN WAS OF YOUR DOING, THIS APOCALYPSE SPRANG FROM YOUR BROW, YOUR NAIVETY AND WEAKNESS HAS KILLED YOU ALL
P.S if you can't tell I feel not pity for this Twilight, only an over powering urge to slap her...repeatedly
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A thing i want my readers to keep in mind here is that this was all set up by the demons into the very last detail.
They expected her to act like this. If it wasnt for the perfect setup of all things and the strong support of the demons, this would have been prevented.
She may have triggered it all, but it were the demons who set up this chain reaction and supported it until it showed its full terrible potential.
1252646In that case I take my hat off to the Deamons, that would have to best batman gambit I've ever seen, though I would expect no less from Tzeentch god of dickery (cookie if you get the reference)
Argh, i was expecting it... Celestia.. i see who is the real monster now.. monster.. no, that word is too inacurate regarding what she have'd done !!!
I feel really bad for twilight ......great job *rise a skull full of blood* i will drink in the name of your geniously insane mind !
last one thing: should i must expect LESSBLOOD from your "final" chapter ?
Balancer: it's true Tzeentch wouldn't done better than these deamons have planed ! (Iron Within, Iron Without!)
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Three different endings, three completely different atmospheres and outcomes.
That's all I will say.
If you still haven't read the story (why the hell are you in the comments then?), then i highly recommend you listen to this after Malice states his purpose and Lady Truesight speaks a few lines afterwards
Just...As i was reading this story and got to about that point, i remembered this soundtrack and began to play it...This song just seemed so perfect for that ending
bravo sir - this was heartbreaking
I can not forget the horrors I just read
It was totally worth it
Juts gotta say before my last comment that this has been one hell of an adventure for me. Reading every goddamn gore filled chapter and enjoying it in a creepy way And this ending... just wow. Speechless and horrified. Kudos to you sir.
Now to read the other endings
God Nero, you had me so hooked to this book that I red it all in a week. get it?
RED IT! :)