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okay .... interresting
I had been afraid that Fluttershy is suddenly a reaper
But it looks as if even Twilight does not want that fluttershy become a reaper
well-fitting for the valentine's day :D
but Obsidian is now in a little cyrsis between his mission and his social life with the other ponies
Very interesting,so fluttershy is in love with a emotionless being,and she knows he has no emotions...
Love really is blind.
Interesting ,and i knew spike was a bit dumb but not noticing a heart shaped hole in "Twilights" chest is really the top by now lol
Why...Did...It...End...On...This...Part.
I hope Fluttershy becomes a reaper :D
More.When will the next chapter come?
220505 Notice how Depair only showed up during the night so far. She makes sure Spike thinks its Twilight.
I really was unsure about this chapter. Hope it turned out somewhat believable.
220513 I can't tell. Just finished this chapter yesterday and finished fixing it up today.
Haven't started working on 14 yet.
220545 Idea for chapter 14...Make Fluttershy have the Reaper powers.ALL of them.Including the scythe...But,she can decide when she will die :D
i wish Obsidian really could love her back. i think they would make a great couple. and i hope spike eventually figures out the truth about Despair.
220553 That makes no sense and would violate with the rest of my story.
220558 Well...Then Fluttershy could have soemthing no other reaper has. D:
220545
So a simple explanation is she uses a illusion to cover the bleeding hole and stops the bleeding (or spike thinks its all his blood? lol )
And fluttershy will sooo get heartbroken and end up insane i bet,hope not but we will have to see
what a Twist!
But seriously, quite an interesting development we have here. Can't wait to see where this goes.
220581 You did not read the part where i said "night" right?
Despair only appeared in situations where even her sillouette could hadly be determined so far.
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I did but blood doesnt just disappear(or it does since shes a demon? lol ) and he at least will have to notice that shes bleeding all over him while beating him.
Plus with him being a dragon and his eyes in my head he sees better in dark then a pony (if he could recognize its Twilight before she spoke i thought he saw enough of her to identify her,so would see the hole)
But im ok with "its dark" ,just wanted to know that lol
I was laughing so hard during Fluttershy's 'misfortune' and her happiness made me smile. This will make it all the sweeter when something bad happens to her. Obsidian just may go ape shit.
Gash I hate catching up with the series just for the sake that now I have to wait god knows how
Long for another chapter!!
But in all honesty you're doin a great job, so keep it up!
Aww but O doesnt love her back DONT WORRY FLUTTERSHY I LOVE YOU
«Fluttershy, you can’t out run your fate, but you sure as hell got to try».
After reading this chapter I suddenly find myself wanting «The Darkness»/MLP crossover.
Oh. And silly, silly Obsidian. You can't control the Darkness.
223940 Maledictum Insania is a creation on its own, not a "the darkness" crossover as you imply it.
If it was, then sure you cant controll the darkness.
In my story, light, darkness and magic are free, neutral forces that do never choose sides.
224039 I know that. Never implied otherwise. But with playing second part of the game and the talk about controlling the darkness in this chapter, I really couldn't get this thought out of my head. If this chapter came out about a week earlier, I most likely wouldn't even noticed it.
And of course your fic is not a crossover. If it were, I wouldn't have to want one, now would I?
Anyway, sorry if I somehow managed to offend you.
Poor flutters
Also how will celestia take this
MOAR!
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Okay, okay! Sheesh give me a moment to work on it!
Chapter 14 is done by 1/4 so far.
238632 Giggity
Lol @ all previous comments. Well, these are all very interesting developments. Derpy is a tactical genius, Despair is still a big problem, Fluttershy has an affinity to darkness and a crush on Obsidian. You are appealing to almost all of my interests. If you could find a way to incorporate EDM and giant mechs, I could die on the spot as the world's happiest man.
goddammit spikes a pussy why doesn't he just tell rarity or the other elements or some shit im such a troll
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My reaction. Woah, I did not see that coming at all! You, sir, sure know how to write a good story! I can't wait to see Fluttershy unlock this new potential; but if Obsidian does anything to hurt her, I will hunt him down and give him a piece of my mind! Now, on to the next chapter, but first I need to gather all the pieces of my brain.
i must say i am blown away by this chapter, its really developing my impression of your own take on fluttershys character.
call me a oddball but i like this shipping XD
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Oh don't worry.
Many approve of this shipping.
i am drawing a sketch to commemorate this moment XD
FINALLY!!!!
1201567 I like it because he'll break her heart again.