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Derpy.....REAPER? AWWWEESSSOOOMME
Derpy has always been mysterious, hanging out in the background. So this does not entirely surprise me.
Lol Derpy is best reaper
And whats next?
Fluttershy is the future reaper, Dash is a half Demon whos mother/father is some Arch Demon ,Twilight is actually Celestias Daughter, Pinkie makes pony cupcakes and Rarity and applejack are the only ones normal?
Cant wait for next chapter...
And all this time I was expecting all the reapers in a line doing the Cann-Cann, nasty...
hmm still not sure whats up with fluttershy, especially at the end... that leaves a few questions open
190902 lol
190972 do you seriously think i would write that?
191018 as you can guess from the ending of chapter 12, Fluttershy's secret will be revealed in the next chapter. Chapter 13 will be special as well. Im not going to give out any more spoilers though, other than that I plan to release it at valentines day
Is it because Fluttershy has a strong association to life that she can feel reaper stuff?
squeee! can't wait for the next chapter!
191045
Yes, yes I did.
But I must say, VALENTINE'S DAY?!?! NO!! You need to release it on Friday the 13th.
An Amazing chapter, now I'm wondering what Despair has planned for poor Spike. I wouldn't be surprised if Despair is shaping Spike to become a demon too, because if I was writing this I would do that. Then again I have been writing about large gratuitous battles that end in epic finales so maybe it's simply my own literary madness that wants to see Twilight lose Spike (MWUAHAHAHAAHAHA)
Hmm i'm lookin forward to Flutter's, Twi's n RD's 'fate' n this whole thing.....Derpy..............expected.......yet awesome. Also just what IS Despair playin at?............another Malice in development, perhaps with a personal agenda against Twilight......Time will tell.......
Just had a thought, what about sparker and dinky doo?
191964 There's a logical error in your idea. Spike is a dragon, not a pony. He is not affected by Maledictum Insania and therefore can not fall to insanity or give birth to a demon. Despair knows that.
192555 Im trying to stay close to the cartoon. The whole Sparkler and Dinky Doo thing has been set up by the fans.
I cant use that as a base to work at, since it can be proven false anytime.
This is also why I wont refer to Berry Punch as an alcoholic.
So far, Derpy has not been given any deeper connections to other characters.
So I'll just stick to that and say Derpy has no social connections, relationships or relatives.
193117 Ah right, forgot about that. I'm guessing Despair has some sort of plan for Twilight, possibly relating to her name. A demon named Despair is hardly going to simply lash out, probably gets more creative and seems to be very intelligent so far. So I look forward to whatever you do with this Demon, I'm sure it's going to be very interesting... and fun
I made myself an account just to say this. Fuck man, you are good at making suspenseful and interesting stories. Keep this up I hope to see more sooner than valentines day. Oh and how can one change their username? My iPod sucks and I meant it to be crazyeight14. Help would be appreciated!
200595
Thanks buddy. But it takes at least a week for me to write a chapter. Got a lot to do you know.
The next one will not come out before valentines day. Might even miss that date if things go wrong.
To change your username, click the "Edit Account" button.
Thanks man, that just saved me some frustration of making a new account. oh and yo dawg you should add me on Xbox live if you got one. I'm a very social person as you may have guessed by now. account name is crazyeight14.
200770
No I dont have xbox live.
But I still would highly appreciate hearing comments from you.
Haha well I can say that you have successfully wasted a week o my life with this, although I'd hardly call it wasted. I used to read fan fictions but only in the gore category, but this has made me appreciate fan fictions for so much more.
Please dont kill Spike he is a really cool dude
I want evil twi to die please lol
Woho! I got a new piece of fan art again!
Ashley Culbreth, the girl who drew the Obsidian Shards art, also made one of Truesight!
i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg257/DarklordNero/Truesight22.jpg
Thank you again, Ashley!
Derpy is a reaper? For some reason i'm not suprised at all.
Plse make moar
215913
Glad to hear you enjoy my story so much.
For your first comment: I never revealed what the kind of food is that Obsidian needs. You can only assume what it is.
for your second: Um... does it arrouse you to think of RD dieing or something?
the third: ..... okay yes death does arrouse you. Question answered.
fourth: Makes sense does it not?
Anyway, Valentine's day is very close. My pre-reader is going through chapter 13 today and tomorrow it will be released.
I saw the trailer on you tube and had to sate my curiosity by reading the first chapter. The foreshadowing and suspense kept me reading. I just made an account because I wanted to say well done my friend! Well done!
And Derpy is best reaper...
219795
Thank you very much. And it is a pleasure to hear that the trailer works.
By the way, later today, I will release chapter 13.
Derpy is a reaper. Derpy Hooves is an undercover reaper. You know, this is just so goddamn out there, that it's actually quite brilliant. A little bit too much exposition-ish of a chapter, but considering this is a gathering after all, I can let it slide. If this were a stream-of-consciousness note, the beer-tally would be up to abut 10 by now, but you already know my stance on that. I'm a sucker for lore though, so in any case, this was a decent, solid chapter in my eyes.
However! You seriously need to give this at least another run through. I'm not sure how many errors might still lurk, but I found 2 particularly egregious ones:
"We grand purity and sacrifice for Equestria.”" <--- pretty sure you meant 'grant'
"Those who did manage to particularly consume him instantly turned into elders." <--- 'partially', me thinks.
Either way, I'll get to the last 2 chapters as well, tomorrow.
Derpy is a reaper? WAT?! Sweet!! I admit my head is still throbbing a bit from processing that, but that is just downright awesome!!! So what is up with these Spectralists? Now that I know RD is one of them, I'm curious to know more about them. Can't wait to read more! Now, onward to the next chapter!!
886672 I knew this in the cupcake chapter...
derpy being a reaper ,oddly enough, makes alot of sense with head cannon of her from the show
A singular emergency potion.
That'ssofuckingsmart