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Epic! Was Claymore an homage to the Claymores in the manga 'Claymore'? They're both demon hunters?
Otherwise, I want to know who the school child is with the 'aura'!! Damn questions rattling around my brain! Arrgh!
Great chapter though. I must admit that I feel sorry for Snails, I normally don't care for him, but in this case I do. Demon abduction can't be fun...
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No, I didn't refer to any other piece of work by using the name Claymore.
I used it because it was originaly the name of a sword type. To me, it sounded fitting to an elder reaper.
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And it's a good idea, it sounds cool. It's just a coincidence then, creepy!
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Not too creepy. It is actually a lot harder to avoid such coincidences, keeping in mind how many billion stories are out there.
And there is always a person that can relate one thing from one story to another.
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True, I haden't thought of it that way. I suppose that out of the hundredes of people here, someones bound to make a connection somewhere. Also, Dave wouldn't have fit an elder reaper, so it's for the best!
Submit this for Equestria Daily.
If you can update the history with a bigger rate,Gratias agimus,Nero Darkard.
By the way,can you add me into the history?You can change my name and so,but...Just look at my profile picture.I would appreciate if you could do so.
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I already sent MI to EqD twice.
Got rejected both times for "insufficent writing skills, flawed grammar and gore"
305916 Right.I'm going to send you a PM.Check your PM message box 10 minutes after you read this.
Epic author is epic.
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Why thank you most sincerely.
Near the beginning I couldn't help but sing the song: "Don't Fear the Reaper" by the Blue Öyster Cult
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MANGA IS FOR FAGGOTS.
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Takes one to know one.
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...Your argument is invalid...
...I think...
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um... soooooo... what do you actually think about the new chapter, guys?
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Said what I think: Loved it!
Hold on...
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Haha, best be trollin', cause your avatar is clearly drawn in manga style.
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To you: Thanks lol. Love bronies sometimes... Scratch that; All the time! (Ok, now I actually do sound like a faggot...)
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No thanks, I already got a Nice Cup of Bossade.
BUT I LOVED DE CHAPTER!
And that's how Equestria was DESTROYED MWHA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
Oh my gosh...
I just watched "It's about time"
I cant believe what I just heard there!
Ancient, evil monsters?
Cerberus is guarding a gate that keeps them locked?
Are they seriously talking about demons in a demon stronghold?
The more MLP keeps proceeding, the more I get the feeling my story is actually coming true!
with the new episode you have some interesting stuff that is canon (Cerberus and the doors of tartarus)
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I know!
This is just perfect!
I keep getting supplied and confirmed with every new episode coming out!
Read Update. (I loved it by the way)
Read Comments.
Laugh at stupid troll.
Read more comments
Realize That I havent watched the new episode.
Covers eyes and ears and runs out of the room.
Hits head and wakes up an hour later.
Parents still nowhere to be found
I did notice some grammatical errors but EQD is crazy for rejecting you
STORM THE GATES BRONIES!
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I was informed that if enough people send them the request to add my story to their database, they might give in.
Thats how cupcakes ended up on their page, despite it obviously violates their restrictions.
So, if you want to see MI on EqD, get a lot of people to know my story and ask them to request it.
309957 well people are already making fan art of your stories so is wont take too long to get featured
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Ive been rejected by EqD twice...
I dont think they will come up with the idea to feature it now.
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Are you mentally retarded?
Manga is not an artstyle.
It's a form of book or comic or whatever.
The artstyle is Anime, which sucks dick aswell, but my avatar is from Monster Girl quest so it evens out.
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Wow, facts here are fucked... You do realise that manga came BEFORE anime, most anime is based off of a manga. The style ALL anime is done in will be respective of the manga that came BEFORE it. And considering how the whole thing is drawn, I would say yes, it is an art style. Besides, I like the 'art' and I presume you do too to some degree, seeing as your avatar is of the very same 'art', Monster Girl or not.
So once again; You trollin'? Or actually that stupid....
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I need to ask you both to stop this.
This is not a flame war chat.
This is the comment section of a fanfiction.
I thought it was scootalloo since...cupcakes... but if the pony has a cutie mark then it cant be her.
So its... snips... a pair of scissors as a cutie mark
As for "requests to add a story" EqD dont do that i believe, the author has to forward the story themself and if the EqD people disagree they wont feature it even if its a literal master piece of awesome ,dripping with cool.
But theres always exceptions, but the suggestion would need to come from someone of them "team" most likely.
Cupcakes was long ago, and that was before the no gore rules (that was made because a lot of people started copying Cupcakes wasnt it?)
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I guess you missed out several parts on the last chapter.
Maledictum Insania takes place 3 years after the cartoon.
So, the CMC are teenagers now and all have their cutie mark.
I even went so far as to describe what their cutie marks look like.
Anyway, what does scoot have to do with cupcakes?
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Thats actually stories overlapping each other in my head that made me forget that.
And in one Cupcakes version Scoot is Pinkies "assistant" ,helping her with all the harvesting and what not.
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Your a fucking nerd.
I hate anime, but I have to bear with it to play Monstergirl Quest.
And do you know what that is? It's a porn game, and something better than whatever your ten year old interests are.
I'm sorry for participating in this flamewar, but this guy is a faggot.
I like this story, very much.
Da see did my eyes just fuck? Great chapter, love the amount of character development you're tossing into this. It gives the reader a deep appreciation for obsidian. And I can't wait to see how ou incorporate the newest episode into the next chapter. Maybe a fight with Cerberus?
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I was absolutely shocked myself when i heard what kind of awesome material I had been provided with.
It totaly sounds like a demon strong hold, being guarded by cerberus.
Well if he keeps the demons inside, its very unlikely there will be a battle AGAINST him.
My comment is going to be harsh and therefore i want to add this disclaimer, i really enjoyed your story and the lore and world building you do is top notch, easily equal to many of the items that you see on Eqd. Now for the harsh stuff.No offense is meant by this but as it stands now this story stands no chance of getting on EqD, there are too many grammar and spelling mistakes even in the later chapters. the other problem you would have is that while your writing has improved tremendously the first 5-7 chapters would need to be entirely re-written and the rest heavily edited before you stood any chance of pleasing the Pre-Readers(by re-written i don' t mean plot wise but a total reconstruction of the grammar and the word choice, same whole different ingredients). I would offer my modest skills as an editor if you should ever decide to undertake this endeavor. and even if you were rejected re-writing the early chapters would still help you as it would make it easier for new readers to get into your story. the current ones are very difficult to force through and that probably costs you new readers.
anyway pm me if you want someone to help cleanup your story
Edit: i see you have edited the early chapters since i read them, they are significantly improved, Kudos.
i apologize if this seems long winded or pompous, i am not practiced at writing these sorts of reviews
P.S. Claymore is an anime about demon hunters who use power granted by being part demon to fight monsters. if they absorb to much demonic power they become incredibly powerful demons and are nearly impossible for their comrades to kill. so yeah I assumed it was a reference too.
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I constantly try to improve my skills and I gladly take every help I can get.
I am convinced this story is worth a lot more attention and I'm willing to work hard to make it a true masterpiece.
If you can help me overhaul the story and improve my skill and style, you're very welcome.
And really, I had no idea about an anime called Claymore.
I just chose this name because it sounded fitting.
It's the fat one, isn't it? the one with the fork and knife cutie mark from the Hearts and Hooves Day episode. It has to be. it fits too well
Maybe, the demons corrupt Cerberus, or something along those lines.
i dunno, I prefer if you make the story.