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All cool but really had to be a "heart" shaped hole?
It will be a gory experience surely.
Ill take it as the demons name being Despair (*shrugs* since all in capital letters lol ) who either kills and/or possesses Twilight or just takes her form.
Obsidian will obviously fail in protecting them,or it was all part of Celestias plan from the beginning. : trollestia:
Nice Spoiler image, now I really want to see the next chapter, you big tease
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It is that long because it is a huge, extremely detailed story. Ive been developing it for over a year now and I can say without the least bit of exaggeration that im still just getting started. By my rate of like 2 or 3 chapters per month at maximum, I will be busy with this story for over a year still.
This is definetly not a story for a lazy reader who likes "1000 words or less" stories, but for one who likes to kill time by reading a detailed, deep and complex masterpiece.
81602 Oh I am a very lazy reader. But you bastard, you already have me hooked and im only like in the 4th paragraph. I love reading, but im dyslixic so it takes me a really long time to read haha. oh yeah and TRACKEDDDD
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This is actualy quite a huge compliment right there.
Take your time. Don't rush.
As I said, I can't write a lot per month.
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HAHAHAHAHAHA so im reading right. and i get an email when you reply to my comment and my phone tells me when i get an email. So im at the part where Obsidion just introduced himself and is writing a letter and my phone goes off and i jumped so hard
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That, is brilliant!
Sorry to startle you.
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Haha I lol'd
81623>>81628 HAHA i know, After i saw that picture, thats all i saw in my head and idk i was so in the zone. And dont worry about it, that just means that your story is good.
I love such stories,but i love them finished so i can read it all .
This is why we need a time machine so we can go to the future and read such stuff.
So i Just read the rest of chapter 1. Or is it chapter 1-3 idk. But every time you make me DAWWWW and then you take it away. Like the part where he tanks Twi for saving them from being slaves and then you take it away by saying that he didnt care about Twi or her friends.
Oh and i love how pinkie says that "its too bad that Trixie died but she was a meanie anyways." I mean wtf!
Trixie is dead
shoot i aint even mortified
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Since you have reading issues, ill be blunt with you.
Everything I write, I mean it just like that.
I don't write a single word for no reason and I create controversies on purpose.
Obsidian is acting. Some of the things he says he does not actualy feel like.
He just says them for aliby. He even lies sometimes.
It is all for a reason, though. It all has to do with his mission.
Pinkie's behavior will slowly start making more and more sense as the story proceeds as well.
Hahaha I jumped again. And i know that he is just acting. Its not that i cant read its just it takes a while for my eyes to actualy take the words in. Almost like you reading a different language, even though you know the language it takes a while to actually understand it. Ya see where im coming from?
And thank you for explaining the Pinkie pie thing, because i didnt want you to just drop that.
Just read all your chapters to date, am in love with this story need more will track
My immediate opinion on this was negative, with there being many grammatical and style errors, many messing up the flow of the story. I decided to stick with it, though, since the plot did seem pretty intriguing, and I'm quite impressed! The writing may have many errors, but man, you've made a really intriguing plot, and an especially impressive lore!
If you need someone to do pre-reading, by the way, I'd be happy to.
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FINALLY someone who actualy wants to help me fix stuff up! No one ever tells me where my misstakes are!
I would be more than happy to accept your offer.
I know I already wrote a lot, but would you mind help me fix the misstakes I have done so far?
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If you would create copies of the docs, make them editable, and send me a link to them, I would be fine with that.
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By the way, for everyone to know. I am aware my writing style is not perfect and I do make a lot of misstakes.
But you have to pardon it for I am neither born nor living in an english speaking country.
Im from Germany. And for that fact, my talents in english are far, far above average.
83249 I didn't think they had MLP in Germany
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We do, but its awful. Everytime someone tries to translate an english cartoon into german, it sounds incredibly cheesy.
That is why i watch MLP only in english. Otherwise its unbearable.
Anyway, I learned about MLP through the internet, not through television.
I see that derp, Twilight! Aside from that, this story has a really intriguing plot! Can't wait to see what the mane 6 get themselves into this time!
uhhhh *cough cough* where are her wings
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Wings? What?
93412 if she is going to be a reaper she needs wings right?
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Who is going to be a reaper?
Are you refering to the spoiler image?
Have you even read the name of the character?
93554 damn it. i feel stupid.
But i just assumed because she was showing such an interest in reapers.
I thought you were not allowed to have image only chapters... o_0
I most admit, she looks much more awesome in MI2.
The image seems to have vanished
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Yeah Photobucket decided to change their policy out of the blue, after having it unaltered for years.
If you know any page where i can upload pictures to replace the ones that have been "disabled", please let me know.
image dead
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Yes, unfortunately. This story is out for a buch of years now. I can't salvage the image anymore either. My apologies.