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Obsidian being a badass once more. I.e, buck fate I do what I want. Looking forward to the next chapter, though I'm still sad Pinkamena and what I'm going to presume is the story Cupcakes leaked into this story. Dammit dood, you didn't need it, even though it will fit in rather nicely.
I smell ''Cupcakes'' from this chapter.
>:U why i no understand?!
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Wait... Your not going to...?
You had to add cupcakes didn't you
still it's nice to see obsidian being badass again to stop f**ked up pinkie.
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It didnt 'leak' into the story.
These events were planned from the very beginning if you think back.
923456 Well I suppose Cupcakes works better than Rainbow Factory of Fluttershy's Shed
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNN!
Oh sweet celestia! I've heard the beginning of Cupcakes enough times to know where this is going!
Fly Obsidian Fly like the wind you must stop this!!!
924185 I concur, fly on your manly black wings Obsidian FLY!!!
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Wow you like Obsidian dont you?
923456
well well well i see i was onto a little thread of discovery i knew shit was going down after the discussion with the cakes
This is how I feel about you putting cupcakes in this story.
I enjoyed this story up until this point, I enjoy violent storys, but cupcakes was needless violence. Please, please, PLEASE, do not go into detail with the torture.
I'm not sure if my feeble mind could take it.
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I planned this from the very beginning. I gave out enough hints that this would happen.
Well, I can't say much in order to not spoil my plans, but what i can say is: Don't worry.
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My last hope - Capatin Badass saves Dash at the last second then TADA happy ending(chances - 0.0001)... please give me some tears of joy in one of your alternate endings to make up for the future horror.
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Again, I can't say much about my endings.
Just expect them to be in much of contrast to each other.
Three different endings, three different events, atmospheres and leading emotions.
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Never came up with a better name
Well now...
I have read this story uptill this point without commenting, just enjoying your universe and the magnificent plot, but this just took it to a new level, Twilights promise, Pinkamina, Celestias dark plans...
Damn, this is good. As in really good. As in empty-room-or-past-sins-good. Really.
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I never read empty rooms or past sins, but I feel very honored that you put my hard work on the same level as these legendary fanfics.
963094 Well, then I can recomend them, but please, do not let that reading get inb the way of you writing this. Please? Abstinence is kinda hard to deal with..
oh my, i must say its taken me a long time to get to a good pace with this story - i am a slow reader but decided as there is another book i want to read coming up i need to finish one first - i want to say now that up till the this chapter i have found great pleasure in the development of the softer side of obsidian, and the development of the keepers of harmony's darker side, but now you are bringing about this horrid betrayal that we have feared was coming from the beginning, and you have done very well because i am almost afraid to read on, having become attached to the characters as they are now even with the loss of spike, and angel. i wouldn't have cared in the least if you had done this straight up, but bravo - you have made me feel for each loss you create