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The power of love. Hell yeah!!!
I really enjoyed this chapter. I only hope Obsidian's performance improves or he's going to have some severe problems in later chapters. Also Despair is as devious and deceitful as ever, stealing Twilight's memories and making her look like an abusive monster. I look forward to reading more.
A little note of the author about the new episode "Hurricane Shy":
Im starting to get scared how well im just slipping into the gabs of the cartoon.
Again, I gained confirmation the curse of madness truly exists in Equestria and every last pony, even Fluttershy, is affected.
Im starting to wonder if someone from Hasbro is actually reading Maledictum Insania, because it just keeps on fitting in, even with the new episodes!
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i told you
btw, odsidian gets more and more "normal", thats kinda unexpected, but interesting.
that means, love is all powerfull :D
but somehow i get a bad feeling about this "love"
let's hope this story doesn't slowly develop into a clip fic, cuz that's where it seems like it's going.
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Just because it has romance in it doesent mean im going down THAT way.
A w e s o m e .
But somehow I still get a bad feeling about this 'love'.
BTW That is how I think a human reaper would look like in real life:
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HMMMMMM!
Not too bad, but the eyes would have to be black and the wings should be bat wings (and the horn is missing, but if that is actually good in design is debateable)
365399 bat wings?but these wings are way better...Okay...Let me see another one...By the way,here is a photo of poor people thinking they can make 'reapers'.
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I pity the guy who made this when he reads this history.
365399 (sorry,I know,black eyes) This is my vision of Obsidian Shards:(Just replace the eyes with the correct ones and also the wings and horn,I forgot about it)
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MFW Obsidian smiled.
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P.S. Also, MFW You update this story.
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Replace the eyes.
There,click thisThis one is perfect...
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By the way... thats Obsidian to you?
I personaly would imagine him a bit more elite and less of a poser to sit on a throne.
He is very well aware he is just a servant.
A powerful one, yes.
And with a lot of knowledge.
But still just a servant.
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What a perfect response, keeping in mind you used Fluttershy.
365758 Naw,this is the way I imagine him sitting somewhere,bored.Don't mind the skull,just pretend its not there.
Just a normal chair,sofa,or something.
A minor prediction of Obsidian and Fluttershy later that night. Ahem, BOW CHIKA WOW WOW. But on a serious note tthis is truly an epic story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Good Day and Satan bless. -MrHappyFace, Prophet of Satan.
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I said it before but I think I need to repeat myself so no one actually thinks im going down that track:
Maledictum Insania is a mystery horror and love story.
It contains gore, yes. But no sex.
This is NOT a clop fic.
Some guys had been assuming this and I even lost a tracker because I got a bit more detailed about the romance in this story.
I just wanted to clarify this to avoid people getting the wrong idea.
Anyway, im very glad you're enjoying my story.
I really put a whole lot of work into it.
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On another note:
Obsidian and Fluttershy cant have a 'BOW CHIKA WOW WOW' time.
Just think logically for a moment.
Obsidian is an elder reaper. His body is made of almost one thousand demons.
That a fuckload of demonic energy.
Kissing is the only thing they can do, everything else puts Fluttershy in extreme risk of falling to Maledictum Insania.
370781 Thats why they have condums my friend.
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Im not going so far as to debate about that.
No matter how you turn it, the risk is simply too big.
Onle little mistake, and we would have FlutterRage.
370963 Ok, But if you do want to make them have sex, you could just imply it such as writeing something along the lines of, Their lips met and they fell onto the bed. And this conversation has got me thinking, 1) What would Flutters and Obsidian's child look like, and 2) what would happen if two Reaperrs had sex?
370963 And besides, I can think of a few ways it could work. *Mainly oral* but I don't think either of us want to have that conversation.
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You already crossed the line way too far.
What a child of these two would look like is out of question since not at any point of this story is it ever planned that they have a child together, out of said reasons.
But if you like the idea that they start a family, just take the features of these two and mix them up and see what turns out of it.
I personally think monochrome pony genes are recessive though, so most of Fluttershy's features would be visible.
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I'd like to say that it'd look something liek this.
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Holy fucking shmokers.
Thats sweet.
But most of Obsidians features, like the curved horn and the bat wings, come from the reaper curse.
And the reaper curse can not be spread on others.
There always are only 87 of them.
So after being a lazy bastard I finally get around to reading this and all I have to say is :3. Why? No idea. I've been talking to Discord alot lately so my mind is sort of completely screwed up.
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Still a pleasure to hear you enjoy my story.
378361 I enjoy good stories, no matter the state of mind. Your's is a good story. Keep going.
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Thanks for the support.
Would you believe me when I tell you that this is actually my first attempt at serious writing?
378372 then that just proves this thing's level of win. I've tried writing seriously, but for me it's either hit or miss. You it's more straight aces.
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Man those are quite some compliments.
Wished more people would know about my story.
Feels like it is far not as popular as it should be.
^ I told a couple of my friends about your story, they love it. I mean, is that really a surprise?
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Woho!
Thanks for the support!
Wished more people would spread the word.
You, sir, get about seventy internets and 5 mustache spikes
I really tend to avoid the darker fics in MLP, because to me it represents a kind of innocence and other mushy things, but this fic is a masterpiece, no matter how you look at it. The backstory, character development, and the sheer amount of creativity this story has blows my mind. As someone who also tries to write fanfics, the fact that this is your first attempt at serious writing amazes me. My first (and only so far :3) attempt couldn't hope to compare to this.
in a nutshell, you are fucking amazing
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Words like yours are what give me the motivation to continue.
Thank you very much for your support.
I promise to keep on doing my best.
All I hope is that this story will be appreciated by many and makes it into the ranks of those stories that deserve to be memorized.
I was chewing on a matchstick, (don't ask) and my mouth fell open at the actual emotion part. And somehow I did a perfect impersonation of the spy.
That scene between Obsidian and Fluttershy made me smile. That was a very well-written scene and it came in at the perfect moment in the story. Made for one hell of a character development change as well. Although I still have several chapters to read yet as I catch up, I will say this anyway: Keep on truckin my friend! THIS is a good story!
Wow. That is just amazing man. although I totally ship the Fluttershy Obsidian thing, i'm kind of dissapointed that Obsidian is growing weaker as he gains emotion, I mean he might face a demon later on with all the keepers of harmony nearby, and then lose or die or something. Then Fluttershy will be hurt and when he wakes up he will be devastated. Seriously. Love is blind. Other than that, loved the chapter. BTW it's me!!
~Zanaco9
OBSIDIAN SMILED!!!! THE POWER OF LOVE PREVAILS!
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I think you forgot that Twilight and Spike look like they tried to murder eachother.
I'm having surprising amount of fun reading this fic. Since life has enough downers i tend to stay away from tragic tag stories, but this one really hits the spot.
The fact you took your time with the Fluttershard romance and kept it one sided for so long helped too, seeing so many fics jump into 'i wuuuuv youuuu' after first hundred words was starting to kill the idea of romance for moi.
Now to press on and see how many of our major characters keel over once the shit hits the fan.
It just goes to show that no matter how fucked up you are
Flutters by can make you smile
the power of love and kindness fluttershy and obsidian