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this ending is pretty good. its actually the softest ending. here. tho i'm getting the feeling that the demons are going to win in the end.
... Beautiful...
And so ends my favorite Grimdark of all time.
Nero, you my friend are fucking awesome and I hope to be able to write something even half as good
Ahh, the best ending for last OF COURSE!
Well done, well done indeed.
Nice endings, all of them, It was agreat idea to make it multiending actually. I don't have a favorite, but I originally I picked the decision that led to "Letter of Destiny" so I guess that would be my canon ending.
This was one great story, with a good grimdark concept, thank you for sharing it.
How I feel about this ending:
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Downright AMAZING!! And so concludes Maledictum Insania, and I can't think of a better way to conclude it. Nero Darkard, you are an amazing writer! You had me hooked on this story since Chapter 1 and I have enjoyed every single chapter of it! Like I said before, This is the GREATEST grimdark fanfic I have ever had the pleasure of reading! It had an excellent and very solid story, strong and loveable character, it kept you guessing at every turn, and the list goes on! And as much as I prefer not to repeat myself, I'm so blown away I'm going for an encore! (Sigh, not this again.) HOLYCELESTIA!!! THATWASSOFRIGGINAWESOME!!! BEST ENDING EVAR!!!!
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Whew! Much better! But seriously, this story deserves a standing ovation! So here you go!
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My Rating: 9.8/10
this ending is too happy (mainly because of the lack of grief regarding the loss of applejack and raritys little sisters) but i enjoyed reading it as well, seeing as i have now read all 3 endings, ringing bells was the better of the 3, however the duel had the more intense story, and gave discord's place in the story a little justice
Now that it's done and done, I have to say that it was an excellent fic. It's rare that I read a fic with an OC as a main character that I enjoy, but Obsidian Shards is definitely one of my favorites. As far as the endings are concerned, Ringing Bells was the best. It fit the feel of the story the most, the more neutral of the endings, while the duel was everything getting fucked and this ending being the total opposite.
Even if it's the "good" ending i still fine with the other two (maybe i like the neutral more)
the only thing i could say is: thank you for have done this wonderfull and very interesting story ! you were already in my very high favourite list but you reached the top( but i need now to determinate where i put you ) ! again thank you, i take my hat off.
YAY!
This story was too perfect. Can't believe I read a story with an OC for the main character and actually ENJOYED it! I shall remember Obsidian Shards until the day I die. Good read.
This should be the last conclusion chapter instead of the first.
Conclussions work much better when they start with the worst one and end with the best one or canon one.
FUCK THAT WAS AMAZING. I LOVE IT
alright this chapter right here as sealed the deal for me this to me is on par with past sins awesome job nero