Just one of those people on the internet. /)
Fluttershy still isn't used to being a model. Making it in time to all the shows, having to attend various social gatherings. But what she hates most is the attention in public. She can't walk anywhere without being mobbed by a bunch of fans and journalists. That is, she couldn't until she met a certain pony.
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Spur of the moment writing. May continue if I find time for it.
3274125 Oh Burly, what has the world come to?
Anyway, this wasn't bad at all.
The premise of this short fiction is really, really good. I like the story and I like the ending. Well worth reading through it.
I'm guessing that English is probably your second language; the story could certainly use some editing to get the tenses right, and help it flow a little better: but once done I think it could be a real favourite.
3277337 unfortunately its not my second language, but i wrote this after being awake for 34 hours. I don't know why, I just felt like writing, then i passed out. Woke up this morning and realized i'd made an account and wrote a story cause i was sleep deprived.
3277438 As Fluttershy would say: "oh.... my!"
Seriously though, take an editor to this story because I think it's a real rough diamond.