What happens when you have a changeling Queen who rules nothing. A Human who resents ponies for treating him like a science project. And an unusual friendship that resulted in something unheard of in Equestria. Oh and a really weird story, no really.
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It's still a chronicle
awww y you change cover pic i liked the old one
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It suits what's to come
I urge you to write the next chapter.
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Did you like this one?
Gimme opinions!
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Very much so. The whole Celestia motherly thing is rather eerie though. Gives me goosebumps.
Another chapter! Post Haste! *claps hands*
Soo, was that mind magic manipulation(say that 10 times fast), or childhood memories that came rushing back?
It will be da happy buttsecks, correct?
Too bad it wont happy cuz Celestia stole him!
Save him, Chrysalis!
Bad Celestia! BAD! Chrysalis will punish you.
OH god, please get the next chapter out ASAP!
This is just to good to wait for, I cant figure out if Chrysalis will change him, or if Celestia will get hold of his mind first!
holy shit, this is getting intense!
God damn cliffhangers
Nuuu! Dammit Celestia! Stop ruining their relationship!
But in all seriousness this is amazing and I can't wait until the next chapter.
Fuuuuuuck youuuuuuu Celestia! Chrissy needs Richard!
...i just want him to be human...and have the love of chrissy. she doesnt get enough love and this version of her is awsome..ummm the part where celestia said "cos you will love mommy too" was kinda..creepy...
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ok that is a plot twist
What a twist!
NO. Not really jonesing to, either.
Is it wrong that I'm anxiously awaiting that inevitable moment when Richard overcomes Cosmos' personality and (even if he doesn't overcome it, since I'm betting it'll happen either way) gives Celestia hell for this?
...Man, TCB has almost completely ruined my views of Celestia...
I think they put something in the Kool Aid.
An update?
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I hate TCB!
In this story Celestia is nothing like THAT Celestia.
I'm trying to portray her as a mare who's had to make a choice between the life of another, and the survival of her race as well as her chance for motherhood.
It's difficult to do so, but I'm trying (and failing) to make her a good mare doing the right thing, that in other eyes, may not seem so.
sooo richard was born an alicorn, became human, was transported to earth, came back, and the planets magic energies are slowly making him become an alicorn again. right?
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Not saying
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WHY!? dont tease me like this!
Wow, it seems that Richard just had the baddest mindfuck ever.
Also, i'm wondering if in the next chapter Richard will "change his mind" towards Celestia.
Anyway, this looks to don't end well...
PD: START PRAYING TO CHRILESTIA, THE ULTIMATE ALICORN-CHANGELING FUSION GODDESS!
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Wha-hoa, hold on there, buddy! I know yours is the canon Celestia's personality...but that still doesn't change the fact that TCB has forever made me want to see anti-Celly rage moments.
I hate TCB too, dude. Hell, I'm writing an ACB fic simply because of that.
(It's too bad, actually. I've heard that the original TCB was just wish fulfillment, not misanthropic bullshit. It was a certain Chatty annoyance that turned it into that.)
*saw that this updated*
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words cannot describe what i'm feeling
Still want Chrysalis to do that whole changeling infection thing to Richie, if only to mess up Celestia's plans.
Celestia, "The plan should have worked, Richie should now be Cosmo..." She peered at the residual smoke from the spell as it starts to clear and much to her shock revealing a still very bipedal being.It was Richie's form,but it wasn't at least not how it appeared previously as his skin seemed to be cracked and torn like a porcelain doll revealing a shiny black exoskeleton underneath, his hair seemed to have blotchy teal strains in it and his eyes glowed an eerie green color. The most unsettling part was the smile, the long fanged pearlescent white grin that almost seemed to stretch ear to ear.
** Go for a slightly scary look mixed with a little bad ass.
"C-cosmo?"
The being let out a haunting deep laugh as it continued to glare at her. Just as she began to make her approach, the figure was consumed in green flames and whisk itself out of the room.
Meanwhile in wherever Chrissie is located, she sighed as she continued to stare out the nearby window silently hoping that her own spell had taken effect over Richard.and she would have continued her thoughts had the door not burst into a splintery mess as the still slowly metamorphosing body of Richie appeared in the doorway.
.....
Just an idea.
I'm torn, I'm not yet jaded enough to Celestia the character in general to want her to not be at least a bit happy, but it would also fuck things up with Chrysais probably (unless "diplomatic marriage" maybe?)
I dunno, I kinda want her to have her baby, but it would also fuck up Richard's life, so IDK.
Whats this about TCB ruining people's views of Celestia?
Guys, read Diaries of a Madman, that will completely fuck up your view s on both princesses.
Anyway, nice read this is.
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You've portrayed her as a decent leader. However, what pisses most people off (at least from my feeling of the prevailing mood, or maybe it's just my own personal bias) is that she keeps coming back. What she did would permanently destroy any attempts at a relationship other than that of enemies. So for her to keep meddling in his life shows that she refuses to acknowledge that she has wronged him so grievously that there is no fixing it. In that continued interference, she ends up only harming him even more. The one thing that Celestia needs to be told is that she needs to stop digging before he goes from someone who just hates her and fights her passively*, to someone who will actively* fight over the smallest of things just to spite her.
*By "passive" and "active", I mean that a passive fighter will only perform actions that benefit him-/herself and an active one is willing to do anything he/she can to harm his/her enemy (ie: engaging in political subversion to engaging in active combat and warfare) whether or not those actions harm or benefit him-/herself. Basically the difference between someone who is an "unfriendly" to someone who is nothing but an enemy by all definitions of the word.
Yup better late than never, while I am still a bit on the fence on the whole actually a alicorn thing.
I am still enjoying the story.
3532916 It completely fucked up my view on Luna, but I'm not so sure in regards to Celestia. I guess you could say I sort of expected the chess master routine from her, which is exactly what it turned out to be.
Man, Richie's mind is just in total shambles right now. Will he even remember Chrysalis any more?
Whoa, what the fuck just happened?
3532815 Whats TCB?
3532815keep him in equestria to save his race from extinction is meant, anyone would have done the same, but sacrificing their current personality, so that she could relive her motherhood and get a foal, is a cruel and selfish. She should talk to richard and tell the whole truth
Still say ol' bug queen needs an explosive surprise dropped on her. lol. I'm cheering on Celestia in this one.
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Should probably clean that drink off your lap, then.
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I suppose I should've clarified.
It's only certain specific TCB fics that screwed me up, mostly by portraying Celestia as...basically, everything I hate about misanthropy, even though she was one of the protagonists in said fics. Others, like Grayscale, had very, very good characterizations.
3532916 Admittedly tia and luna were the only ones who were straight up evil in diaries,Even discord has his reason.....Hell,Luna COULD be explained,But Tia is just evil in that
*the end scene* in my mind
"oh fuck that!"
Man, this story is so great it almost hurts to read it!
And then Richie was Tirek.
Sorry, too many "alternative history' fanfics recently.
I have a suggestion. When ( not going to say if, because knowing you, this is inevitable. ) richard goes rage mode on celestia you should make him hit her in the head with a 2x4. Just a suggestion. That would be amazing to see. If not, then I'm sure whatever you write up will be most satisfying. That being said... MOAR! QUICK!
MOTHER! FUCKING! CLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFFHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS!!!!!!