What happens when you have a changeling Queen who rules nothing. A Human who resents ponies for treating him like a science project. And an unusual friendship that resulted in something unheard of in Equestria. Oh and a really weird story, no really.
Page generated in 0.032 seconds
Total duration
971 users online
1,900,208 hits today, 2,728,293 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
GACK!!! Ending it on such a twist?!?! CURSES!!! Brilliant chap!!!
Oh god that ending, I really hope this isn't the end of their relationship.
Oooo this is about to get REALLY good...
OH MY GOD! THAT WAS FUCKING INTENSE!!!! I loved every single word of this chapter. Definitely waiting for more. Great work.
Haven't read the chapter yet, but I was promised twibashing. I hope I am not disappointed.
i wouldn't be surprised if he wasn't scared at all. like he likes it.
That Twibashing... Ooh it was WUNDERBAR!
Cliffhangers...
Oh god please make the next chapter soon
Nnnnnnoooooooo!!! Why did you do this to me!??!?
You can't stop it there, you just can't! Not like that!
.... Okay, I'm better now... So,.... When is the next chapter coming out...?
I lied, I'm not better at all!
.........sum bitch..........
however many moustaches for an awesome chapter
Huh..... for all the warnings of Twilight bashing, it wasn't as brutal as I was expected.
NNNNNOOOOOOO curse you CLIFFHANGER S
3379649
I downplayed it a little.
Some of my fans were a bit miffed at my hate for Twilight
YOU BASTARD!
You glorious, bastard!
WHY DO YOU TOY WITH US SO?!?!
This was great. I loved it.
So please write some more? Please?
DUN DUN DUN.
Next chapter is gonna be good
I am pleased. Thank you
I can only hope and pray this ends happily, but, It's part of the "Royal break up chronicles". So I sadly know it wont.
To be honest, I'm kinda disappointed in the Twilight bashing. Two chapters of hype and warnings for it, just to get some yelling, but whatever, great chapter and infuriatingly good cliff hanger.
Damn Cliffhanger!
3379654 Well, given the antagonistic relationship that exists between Richard and Twilight and her general characterization in this story, it isn't hard to see why she would be bashed.
Nei nei nei nei!!! Cliffhangers!!!!! and just in da best part!!
assets.diylol.com/hfs/809/fad/866/resized/cliffhanger-meme-generator-hanging-on-to-a-cliff-for-dear-life-let-me-just-check-my-survival-manual-d1434e.jpg?1312683254.jpg
DAMNIT YOU NEEC TO UPDATE THIS STORY YESTERDAY!!!!!!
whatistheexcel.com/wooobooru/_images/4354aaceec55c2a169c6d57a35f295f0/14%20-%20john_cena%20rage%20wwe%20yelling.jpg
The first part was spot on, and that ending....right in the feels. Great work.
wow, holy trauma to the soul batman.... 0_0
you went for maximum trauma with that little story there. goes to explain why he's so hostile about being stuck in equestria so there's that much.
anyways good chapter. worth the wait.
I think chrysalis should have done that reveal a little differently though. Like maybe spend more time easing him into the truth instead of "Oh by the way I'm a changeling" *poof* On the other hand if you eased it in, you would have killed a lot of story moving drama. Eh...
PS - what's lickle mean?
-"And so the wait continues...."
3379725
Lickle- Little.
Chrissy was just being a tease, as per usual
nice use of a plot device but till the next one comes out presume im angry for wanting to know more but am currently not able to because there are no more chapters as of late
Nice one. But not enough Twibashing.
I was hoping for actual bashing. Like with a rock.
Oh well, it was good enough.
Also DAT CLIFFHANGER YOU *Insert long angry rant rife with insults here* AT THE BOTTOM OF THE OCEAN WITH A NAILGUN.
Looking forward to the next chapter
That cliffhanger, you monster.
Gah! You fucker! If I didnt want that next chapter mmmmmaaaaaaaaannnnn I'd stab you with a spoon. Well done though and update quickly cause I will find you, and there will be silverware.
"Ew oh god. You're a giant bug"
I like Twilight. There should have been more Twibashing, it wasn't as brutal as I expected. She should have been at least gravely injured.
Plot twist: Richard is actually a construct of Chrysalis's imagination.
Oh, Dude...DUDE!!
Holy shit, I was legit tearing up just there and now I'm fucking excited
WOOOO!! THE TRUTH WILL SET YOU FREE!!
3379773
Who said she wont be later on?
That was some enjoyable Twibashing without getting too rough, but now i'm really wondering how Richie is going to react to her... I hope he accepts her, I hope that his heart isn't broken once she tells him the truth about her original intentions.
Pros: New chapter, Yay~ Moar changeling goodness, also yay~
Cons: Can't say I care for bashing, regardless of the reason behind it. That said, do as ye will. I don't like it but I'm not gonna whine about it either. And ewww, cliffhanger. Makes me so sad.
Any idea how long until the next chapter? Not to be insistent, but given that it ended on one heck of a cliffie, a rough estimate would be cool. If not, no big deal.
Oh god damn you and your cliffhanger! I swear that makes me so mad XD first it starts getting better and better than blam! cliffhanger. awesome story though.
3379782 No Inception!
whu... wait WHAT?!? The cliffhanger oh god dammit man. Need new chapter now pweese
Also MOAR TWIBASH if fans can't take a bashing of their favourite character then they have niggling doubts in the backs of their minds saying that parts of the bashing are true
3379792
KILL TWILIGHT!!!
3379677
If I promise to throw something at her later, does it make up for it?
CLIFFHANGER!!! TURN ON THE SIRENS! WE'VE GOT A MOTHERHUMPING CLIFFHANGER!!!
That SUDDEN ending of this chapter D:
DAT CLIFFHANGER