What happens when you have a changeling Queen who rules nothing. A Human who resents ponies for treating him like a science project. And an unusual friendship that resulted in something unheard of in Equestria. Oh and a really weird story, no really.
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OH FUCK NOOOOO
WHERE IS THE PORN?
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!
I think... that you're getting better as you go on. That scene was very fluid and flowed VERY nicely.
SUPER excited for the next bit.
This chapter title made me Dawwww so fucking hard... I am now the black Wilford Brimley.
Eh, I read this for ths story, not the plot. Honestly, I don't give a flyin' fuck whether or not there's clop in the next chapter, or any other chapter. If there is, I'll probably skip it and get back to the story. If there isn't, then whooptiedoo, there isn't any. Doesn't make a difference to me.
Now how the story develops with Celestia...the possibilities...that is most certainly relevant to my interests. You've managed to develop her character quite well despite not having her appear at all so far. Seeing how her continued shenanigans will affect Chrysalis' and Rich's character development is something I really look forward to.
I can't help but wonder, are we looking at a love square here - Richard, Chrysalis, Celestia, and Twilight?
Also, seeing Celestia's reaction to Richard being in love with another mare, and possibly finding out that it's Chrysalis...I don't even know what you plan on doing about that, but I'm certain it'll be priceless.
damn
dem feels.
This is going to end in tragedy, right? You did title this the "royal break up." Does that mean that Richie will break up with poor Chrissy? Or was the "break up" with Twilight, so that's now done. Chrissy needs some happiness.
yessss he accepted her!!!!! that was soooo lovely
Huzzah for a rapid upload of this chapter after the last one! And now to play the "Hurry Up And Wait" game for the next update...
pr0n plox
clop or no clop, this fic is good!
GOD DAMN IT, I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!!!
Good work, very great work. I hope part 2 is just as good or hopefully even better than part 1.
Looking forward to see what you come up with next.
But PLEASE PUT THE CLOP IN, this may sound strange but I have never a clop story that had to do with the changeling queen before.
It would be intresting to see what she does and how she acts during the act.
I NEED INSECTOID HORSE PORN LITERATURE. Thanks c:
i.....waNT.......................CLLLLOOOOOOOOOOP!!!.................................................NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.........................................................................pleaseand great chapter too
I want this story to continue for a LONG time.
awwwww, totally called it he was sorta mad about being lied too. but im glad. it all worked out
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i see a humongous plot twist in the next few chapters.
something with stalky Twilight and or Celestia.
MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP! CLOP!
That went...better than expected. The emotions were indeed all over the place, but in a good way. I like how you handled richie's disbelief and fear of seeing chrysalis' true from, and his coming to terms with it. Hell, I thought he would have put up much more of a mental fight with that revelation, but I suppose not every revelation has to have crap tons of drama attached.
Well, great chapter! I look forward to seeing the next one. As for clop? Well, I actually do not care if you include it or not. The story is great without it, and as long is it doesn't detract from whatever sort of story line you have going, I am all for including it.
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It's either reading about how Chrissy finally found a use for all those holes.
OR
"And then they fucked, let's continue!"
That part.....it's just epic
God. Damn. It. It was just getting to the fun part
Oh man Act II has the potential for some serious relationship drama. I'm certainly glad how things turned out between Chrissy and Richie.That being said, something tells me Twilight and Celestia gonna throw a wrench into the works.....
MORE HORSEWORDS!
PREFERABLY THE SEXY KIND!
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Especially if Richie goes through the change
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And possibly the deaths of Chrysalis and/or Richie. Or maybe not, as I don't see a tragedy tag.
I require hot Chrissy time. Why not incorporate some shape-shifting into the fun as well?
3389184 you never know when fools luck sets in
This was the climatic moment that I was waiting for and I absolutely love how you built it up. The trials and tribulations that are soon to follow are going to keep me hooked, thank you for so much for this amazing addition to MLP fanfiction.
Why yes actually i can.
What? I climbed in through the window, i can't wait until the angry fans break down your door and then tie you to a chair and force you to write.
And i'll get it all on film
What? No clop yet!?
I keep mashing the like button and nothing happens.
Two criminals, a city that needs to burn and the need to escape. Now that the the big reveal is done and taken care of, we can get to the action portion of the fic. Oh and great chapter by the way.
Well at least he doesn't hate her and they are willingly having sex without any manipulation
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That was actually unintentional XD
You should have seen my face when I re-read it
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I'm still awake somehow XD
...Now I'm not, nighty night!
MUSTARD JAAAAAAAR!!!!!!!
FOR THE LOVE OF FAUST, GIVE US CLOP!!!!!!!!!!!
Clop is fine with me seeing as it will in all likelihood have zero negative effects on how the story plays out. You have my blessing to continue, good sir!
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you know it might be a sign of something wrong with me but for some reason I cant get the idea of Richie finally going all the way with Chrysalis after they defeat subdue and cocoon Twilight Sparkle why because there's something terrifyingly amusing about the idea of the changelings being brought back from extinction as the princess assigned to save pony kind from shitty stallions watches from inches away.
or in simpler terms i would like a twilight POV as Richie and Chrissie fuck on top of her cocoon i always imagined that the outside of those things would be like a waterbed
also you've already got the mature tag on you might as well include the good-stuff plus most chrysalis clop so far has been terribly unimaginative try to do better also i cant help but feel as though our beloved couple is going to use Chrissies shapeshifting powers to mock the hell out of Rollestia(fat Celestia) and liberal twibashing
dose anyone ells get the feeling that after Lunas banishment Celestia got really really fat I mean there's never any history less than a thousand years old and I cant help but think of what one hundred years or so of comfort food would do to her oh wait I'm rambling lets stop this comment now.
Fantastic end to a brilliant story! CONGRATULATIONS ON 1000 FOLLOWERS!
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Who said that it's the end?
Not me
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Waterbed cocoon? I love that idea, please Zamairiac make this a thing.
Also shape-shifting....
Yay! Happy ending!
End of Act One
...Or not quite. Now I suppose we get to see how Celestia and/or Twilight work to drive them apart...
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Yup, I completely agree. This chapter was done perfectly and I love this story as a whole to the point where I wouldn't mind if there wasn't any actual sex. I actually got a tinsy bit choked up with all the feels they were throwing at each other.
>>Zamairiac End of act one, whatever! All I know is that you are writing more and I am going to have to order some more party poppers in store for the next chapter!25.media.tumblr.com/e060ed83e640c88886877f27f39d31ba/tumblr_mfz00uiBxT1s208cqo1_500.gif
PERFECT!!! Now hurry up with those updates.
Is there a group for Chrysalis?
I feel like joining one now.
dont care about the clop! hang the clop! the getting rumbled by the solar inquisition, the daring escape/rescue, the sad bits, the funny bits, the anthromorphic humaniod changeling thing transformation, the false climax and real climax, god help me i'll even take cliffhangers! by the lords of hell, story you artistic/genius bastard, i demand story!
YES! Everything went better than expected. Very well then, time to celebrate with a nice sip of local water.
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