A week had passed since the wedding of Shining Armor and Princess Cadance. Life for the average pony mostly returned to normal as Canterlot’s citizens repaired the damage left behind by Chrysalis and her swarm. While Ponyville had witnessed more crazy events than the capital in recent history, Canterlot demonstrated to its rulers that resiliency did not lie with Ponyville's citizens alone.
That provided Celestia just one more reason to protect her subjects. At present, the solar diarch was presiding over a newly formed committee to determine what should be done about the changeling threat.
Celestia found herself in a well-used conference room with an oval wooden table surrounded by fifteen seats. The princess sat in the center of the oval’s north side, with Twilight Sparkle sitting to her right. Various advisors from both the civilian and military sectors joined them to discuss changes to their foreign policy.
As the groups muttered amongst themselves, the lavender unicorn tapped her mentor. “Shouldn’t we wait for my brother to return from his honeymoon? He is the Captain of the Guard, after all,” she whispered.
Celestia fully understood her protégé’s concerns. “Normally, I would agree. However, he was directly manipulated by Chrysalis, and while I know Shining would do his best to stay objective in this matter, I fear he would take a less… diplomatic route.” She let a small smile show through. “Besides, he and his wife need time to recover from the ordeal, and I can't think of anypony better suited to the task than Cadance.”
After mulling it over, Twilight had to agree. “I just don’t see how he’ll be able to relax though. The changelings practically declared war on us.”
Celestia's smile disappeared. “Sadly, I agree. Nevertheless, we drove them from our lands and soundly defeated them. I’m hoping that will allow us to broker peace between us before this escalates into a full blown war.”
One of the mares on the other side of the table loudly cleared her throat. “Princess Celestia, could we start with what we know about changelings in general?”
“A prudent course of action,” agreed the diarch, before turning to the lavender mare at her side.
Twilight was rather comfortable in a committee setting. Her tutelage under the white alicorn taught her much in the ways of politics and how to speak the language. “I’m afraid our knowledge is quite lacking. We have only sporadic texts about changelings, and most of them are mythological, not historical. Everything we know is from firsthoof experience during the invasion. They appear to be insects and most likely have a rigid caste system, but that is merely conjecture.” Twilight suppressed a sigh of defeat. “Other than the fact that they derive power from love and can assume any form they wish, we have no concrete knowledge. Perhaps they can only assume the shape of other ponies - we just don't know.”
As Twilight ended her speech, one of the army captains spoke up. “Then the way I see it, we have two primary objectives. Find out everything we can about them, and prepare ourselves for armed conflict, should it come to that.”
The other military personnel and several civilians murmured in agreement. Celestia was against the second action. Our allies will see a military buildup as a sign of aggression and might do the same. The griffins and minotaurs get antsy when they have a large army at their command and no one to fight against. Since I’ve never heard of a changeling invasion before, I doubt they would stand hoof to hoof against another army in the field.
Before she could voice such concerns, rapid knocking on the heavy oak doors echoed through the chamber, and a frightened earth mare poked her head in. Celestia identified her as Bound Scroll, her chief secretary. The alicorn was troubled to see the mare in such a state. “Princess, we have a diplomat urgently wishing to speak with you.”
Celestia arched a curious eyebrow. “I thought I decreed that all audiences were canceled for the day. If it’s anything truly urgent, they will have to bring it up with my sister during the night court.”
“With all due respect, Princess. I don’t think you want to wait for this one. She claims to be a diplomat for a changeling queen by the name of Cadista.”
The news was met with stunned silence. Celestia, who had dealt with a thousand years of harrowing experiences, was the first to speak. “Where is this… diplomat?”
“She’s waiting just outside.”
An army captain balked at the declaration. “You let a potential enemy agent this far into the palace?”
The earth pony rubbed her left foreleg nervously. “Well, that’s just it. She’s been in the palace for over two years now as Ambassador Gloss. She just walked up to my desk, said she needed to speak on behalf of her queen, and then dropped her disguise right in front of me.”
I remember her, thought Celestia, Two years ago, she requested open borders between our nations to begin trade relations. Her bewilderment deepened. Now that I think about it, Gloss plays almost no role in our politics. She attends open parliament and public court sessions, but only acts to maintain the simple trade agreement between us and her kingdom.
The alicorn addressed Bound Scroll, “I would never turn away an attempt at diplomacy. Send her in.”
“At once, your majesty.”
A few tense moments later, an unusual being entered the chamber with the dignity and poise Celestia had come to expect from the enigmatic Gloss, telling her that she was not an imposter. Or a very skilled one. Her appearance took the room by surprise.
Gloss looked like a normal unicorn with several differences. She had a grey coat of fur and a vivid orange mane, like a normal pony. The most striking were the holes in her extremities - the largest were only the size of a bit.
Her horn was smooth ivory, with no spiral, and curved slightly up, ending in a sharp point. Her eyes had pupils, but they were almost completely hidden by a soft azure glow behind them. The ambassador had the trademark insectoid wings of a changeling, along with a pair of fairly intimidating fangs.
Celestia silenced the quiet murmuring that had filled the room with a rap of her hoof. “Ambassador Gloss,” she began slowly. “I must say you surprise me. You are no doubt aware of the invasion we suffered last week. So, why would you reveal yourself and endanger our treaty? You know that I cannot allow it to stand because it was made under a false pretense.”
Gloss spoke with the eloquence of a Canterlot noble, which further hid any nuances the room full of advisors might use to glean information about her race. “If I may, your majesty, the treaty we share was not written with malicious intent and my—people have made no actions against you. With only a scant few minor exceptions, everypony under Queen Cadista’s rule who has visited your lands has abided by your laws to the letter. Surely you cannot blame us for the actions of another.”
“And how are we supposed to know that?” one of the civilian advisors barked. “For all we know this Queen Cadista is just one of Chrysalis’ aliases.”
Gloss recognized the stallion as the minister of Public Safety. “Tell me, Kickback, who warned you of the invasion in the first place?”
The minister couldn’t answer, but Celestia could. “You did, and you requested no recompense after the fact. Why?”
Gloss inclined her head in thanks for her actions being remembered. “It is as I said - I represent Queen Cadista. My—people have been in armed conflict with Chrysalis’ nation for some time now. My queen required that I warn you of the attack.”
Twilight Sparkle was not yet convinced. “We only knew there was a threat against the capital. Couldn't you have told us more?”
“You must understand,” Gloss replied evenly. “It is not our way to reveal our true nature. If I had told you who you were up against, Chrysalis would have sent harsher reprisals against us. I have been authorized to tell you that my—people were in no shape to deepen Chrysalis’ ire.”
Both Twilight and Celestia caught onto the ambassador’s brief hesitation every time she said ‘people’. It was a quirk that Gloss had always possessed. The alicorn cast her pupil a knowing glance before returning her gaze to the ambassador. “You were hoping the warning would have been enough to force Chrysalis to abort the invasion, weren’t you?”
The room hung on the diplomat’s answer. “You are as perceptive as ever, your majesty,” she said with a nod of respect. “We had hoped that upon hearing of the warning she would back down and not reveal our kind to the world at large. Unfortunately, that did not come to pass.
“Her bid for power has endangered us all, and threatened to mark every changeling as enemies of the state. Chrysalis singlehoofedly destroyed our best and oldest defense. My queen has always harbored great respect for Equestria. She knew it would only be a matter of time before you learned how to counter our disguises and purge us from your realm. She does not blame you for that course of action - she would do the same in your place. In time, you would teach these methods to your allies and we would be cut off from our best source of love. As a result, my Queen has decided to break away from tradition, just as Chrysalis did. We, however, wish to extend the olive branch, rather than cross swords.”
Twilight whispered to the princess. “If this offer is legitimate, then we should take this opportunity. If we open relations with one changeling nation, we could eventually do so with all of them.”
Celestia took it as sound advice and addressed the ambassador. “Before we conduct any negotiations, I must speak with Queen Cadista directly. You may tell her a sign of good will would be the return of any abducted ponies you’ve taken.”
Gloss tilted her head to the side, and her eyes became distant, as if she was hearing someone speak to her. Eventually, her attention returned to the diarch. “While we would like to do what you ask, we cannot, since we never took anypony hostage, your majesty. We have no ponies to return, because we never replaced, nor foalnapped, any of your citizens."
Celestia wanted to believe her, but trust towards the changeling came slowly to the alicorn. “Pray that you speak the truth, ambassador. I will contact you by the end of the day as to when I can host your Queen’s arrival.”
Gloss bowed her head. “Thank you, Princess Celestia. I hope our two nations can continue to coexist peacefully.” After a nod from Celestia, Gloss left the chamber.
“We must consider this new development before we can reach a decision on how we handle future relations with her kind,” Celestia addressed the committee. “To that end, I call for a twenty-four hour recess.”
The gathered advisors agreed, and after the diarch rapped the table three times, they departed. Twilight, however, remained in her seat until the council left. “Princess, do you really think Cadista wants real peace between us?”
The alicorn recalled everything she knew about Gloss and the treaty Equestria had written with her. “I get the feeling that Cadista is a minor power in her part of the world. Immigrants from her lands are extremely few, but I don’t know if they stay in Equestria. Her kingdom has only two main exports: a gel-like healing agent that accelerates the recovery time of skin injuries, and advanced machinery. They’re the ones who sell us parts for our train engines that we can’t manufacture on our own. As far as I know, the only imports they take are steel and coal. Both their imports and exports are in small quantities, however, as the imports they ask per month could barely keep Manehattan afloat for the same length of time.”
Twilight assumed any actual trade was done within Equestrian borders while the changeling merchants returned alone back to their lands. Perhaps they are simply more self-sufficient. Her ears perked up at the thought of delving into a new culture. “We still know next to nothing about changelings, and if Gloss’ appearance tells us anything, it’s that they are far more diverse than what Chrysalis’ group would have us believe. I’d like to go to their lands and study how they live.”
The solar diarch gave a lopsided grin. “I commend your will to put aside your misgivings about changelings in light of the invasion, but they are a secretive people by their own volition. I doubt they will want anyone poking their noses too deeply into their society for some time.” Her tone shifted to that of a warning. “Plus, their lands lie to the distant south beyond the Cresnox Jungle. It’s a dangerous place for travelers of any kind.”
Twilight was not so easily dissuaded. “Well, the changelings manage to do it every time they come in to trade. I’m sure you can convince Cadista to let me tag along as a temporary liaison to gather cultural information for a more permanent ambassador later on.”
The white alicorn was intrigued. While half of Twilight’s tutelage during her time in Canterlot was in magic, the other half had been in politics. “That is an excellent suggestion, and I’m sure Cadista will agree as a show of good faith. Nevertheless, I still want to take my measure of their queen before I can let you go. If I sense any deception in her, I will send someone else in your place.” Twilight considered this a sound condition. “And if Cadista appears trustworthy enough to avoid harming you, then I also want an army detail to escort you. Five soldiers should be small enough to avoid threatening Cadista.”
Twilight grinned widely and nuzzled her teacher. “Thank you, Princess. I only hope I can build a bridge between our two peoples.”
The solar diarch returned the affection in a motherly manner. Even though Twilight was a young adult, the alicorn couldn’t help but to see the lavender mare as a surrogate daughter. It always went unsaid between them, but both knew how the other felt. “If anypony can get it started, it’ll be you.”
Pretty good
Off to a decent start.
So far your story has gotten off to a good start. I'll favorite it and wait for the next chapter.
Off to a good start. I'll be watching this.
You have my attention good sir. This should be interesting to see how things play out.
Go on....
NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Something that will potentially distract you from the greatest story I've ever read!Hey wait a sec, this is pretty dang good!
I shall also fav this! And I shall await the next chapter eagerly!
A Changeling story?! 8D
Now you're talking my lingo! And the best part? It's written by you!
To lose and claim anew, or to claim anew only to lose. That is the way of things in Castle Oblivion.
I must admit I cringed slightly at the name "Cresnox Jungle" but past that this is pretty good Please, continue...
Oh dear, I think I'm addicted to this story now. Need more! anyway I can't wait to see how Twi gets transformed into a changeling and how she'll fix the issue... hopefully with Queen Cadista helping as well.
BTW, My people does not need hyphenated.
>returns from work
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Holy... I didn't think this story would grow so popular so fast.
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What's wrong about the name?
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I'll get around to tCToH. But I felt like I needed to write something fresh to shake up the old cobwebs.
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Thanks for the vote of confidence.
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I use long hyphens like — during dialogue to demonstrate that the speaker pauses briefly while … or (Ellipsis) are for much longer pauses.
I do that mostly so I don't have to break up dialogue just to say
Really good. Can't wait for more chapters.
not bad, i like the idea so far! hope to see the next part soon :D
changelight? do want!
>>>Gloss recognized the stallion as the minister of public safety. “Tell me Kickback, who warned you of the invasion in the first place?”
The minister couldn’t answer, but Celestia could. “You did. And you requested no recompense after the fact. Why?”>>>
Hmm, this is an internal logic flaw. The first thing Celestia would do after the changeling invasion is find out who sent the warning and how they knew about a race nopony had heard of before.
The warning was supposed to be anonymous in the episode, which makes more sense then that Celestia would not know how to identify the sender.
Very intriguing start to this, and I'm always up for a changeling story with a fresh new approach to worldbuilding them. Multiple queens of multiple nations, one of whom had a preexisting (though hidden) treaty and trade relationship with Equestria? I like it!
Interesting take on Twilight suddenly deciding to go, completely forgetting about friends, family and everything else. Then again, she is Twilight Sparkle who was presented with a possibility to study something completely unknown.
Also, this paragraph:
This was bad. Why? You don't put two speakers in the same paragraph. This:
would have been much better.
And what 3254277 said. The first thing you do is to check the one who provided the warning. If not, then give a reason to do otherwise. Some sort of flashback or at the least a stray comment as to why she was not checked for being affiliated with the invaders.
Welp, I'm off to the next chapter!
For a diplomat, that was a very undiplomatic way of putting it. It would have been equally accurate, and less alarming, to say “my queen has already complied with your request” or “my queen says your request is unnecessary, as it is already done”.
Hmm, drop of a hat to do a research project? Totally Twilight! But a politician? That's slightly more shady...
Keep going! ;)
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Oh, right! How did it go?
If a diplomat says, "Yes," he means "Maybe."
If a diplomat says, "Maybe," he means "No."
If a diplomat says, "No," he's no diplomat.
I think that Twilight is a bit to forgiving after horrible events she experienced.
Outside of that, it is nice that Celestia is worried about Twilight's safely, however the idea to give her 5 soldiers sounds more like that she will go with her 5 friends, so practically it will be sending elements of harmony into dangerous terytory.
Celestia could at least say that she will be sending seven, so that two additional guards can be cannon meat in case thinks turn bad.
KILL CONSUME ESSENCE DESTROY, oh sorry am I being a bad impression?
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I APPROVE!!!1111!
But no really, I really do like this! And it's perfect for a changeling story!
A bit more on why Twilight was included at this important meeting would have been nice, considering she is never actually shown in such a setting in the show. Possibly something to the affect of directly having Celestia say Twilight is there to provide the report on available information about changelings, rather than making it seem like a last minute decision to have her do so. But otherwise it was good.
Only read a snippet and it was great
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Actually it makes perfect sense to have Twilight there. Not only was she in the thick of things during the invasion, she is also a learned scholar who is far more likely to know anything about the changlings than politicians and nobles. Additionally, she is one of the bearers of the Elements of Harmony, making her an excellent representative of that group at the same time. As a sub-plot, if Celestia is (as is suggested in the show) grooming her to become a princess/ influential court official, then she would need experience in situations like this. Essentially Twilight is getting OJT (on the job training) before she realizes she has the job.
This was the first fic I read on this site, and has been my favorite since. Really loving the sequel to! Can't wait to see more of Twilight's Hive!
I like this
3892741 You say that about everything you comment on...
I find this fitting.
What's a... "people"?
4154240 I like this
4525923 I'd like to think of it as a species neutral term that refers to any sapient species such as pony, griffon and changeling.
3249952 Whoa, random CoM reference. Nice. Might as well, then.
"To find is to lose, and to lose is to find."
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Re-reading the series. For my first time. Seriously one of the top 3 X is a changeling fics I've had the pleasure of reading.
4525923 a 'people' refers to a group of people identified by common ethnicity/culture/location/etc.
in this case referring to the citizens of the hive.
5235340 In fact the origins of the word, as well as person, were never tied directly to being human. They both were generic terms that could be used for any sentient race.
*sigh* still as good as I remember it.
3748109 nail on head. heck Celestia in this chapter says specifically that half of Twilight's training was in politics so there's actually no logical reason not to include her.
an interesting start. i look forward to reading further
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Lots of Lavender unicorn syndrome. Other than that, It's pretty great of a start.
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Re-reading this.
Reading back through the series, love it. Simple can't wait for the next chapter :D
My brother recommended this to me. and he's spoiled a bit for me but nothing too important.
Definitely an interesting lead in. I'm intrigued and looking forwards to more
Also, noticed this in the short description at the top of the page when the chapter is open,
Rest of the chapter was fine, but I imagine nobody has pointed this out to you yet so I thought I'd say something.