Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon said that they could stay in an abandon mansion longer then Appleblom, Sweetie Belle, and I. I don't really want to go in there but I just can't stand their smug attitudes. So we agreed, and my friends made a plan to sneak out and meet up with the two of them at the front gate. I have a really bad feeling about this, but I don't want to bail on my friends, so I'll put aside my fear and go into the mansion to prove Diamond Tiara wrong and show we are braver. I mean after all it's only one night right? How bad could it really be...
Although there are quite a few spelling errors, this was a interesting story
i think this could use some dialog and more description when it comes to the noises and feeling but over all this seems pretty good