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XfluttersX


Oh, hi. My name is, um, flutters...

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The Griffons have declared war, and it is now time to fight back. The griffons have no idea who they are up against, but when the fighting gets intense in Canterlot Castle, the mane six realize that they may be up against more than just Griffons. After fighting they're way out of Guilda's house in the sky, Trixie and Twilight hurry back to Ponyville to prepare the ponies for war. They have to get to Canterlot before the Griffons.

If you like it, leave a like I guess. Same goes if you don't and if you don't it would be awesome if you would comment what you don't so I can fix it.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

:twilightsmile: wow this is pretty good keep up the good work cask wait for the next chapter

This is going great. Loved the way the ponies took it to the dumb griffons. I never liked Gilda and I'm pretty sure if they put any other griffons on MLP I probably wouldn't like them either.

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Hahah thanks! I didn't like Guilda either. Thanks for the support!

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Hey man thanks! I've been working on the next chapter, but it's getting harder and harder to do. Will get it finished before the end of this week though! I promise! :pinkiecrazy:

3225088 Each chapter does tend to get tougher, although with my Terror in Equestria stories I have just had the words come to me until now. I am working on the fifth and final one and I am having a serious case of writer's block right now. :fluttershysad:

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I know! I will be typing, and then blank. My mind does nothing, for days maybe even weeks at a time! It's terrible. I mean I love writing and all, but i get stuck waaaay too often.

3225191 I didn't even discover I had any talent until recently when a story about Fluttershy came to mind. It is called "From Fluttershy to Brevity Thrash and Back Again." I got the name Brevity Thrash from a nightmare version of Fluttershy I saw online that had that as her name. After that, things started coming naturally. What I will do after Terror in Equestria 5: A Thousand Years Later is done I'm not sure. I was going to stop the series at 3 until something went through my mind to where Colgate (a pony I like very much) who Twily made a commander would challenge her for the throne. I'm not going to spoil it for you though. You'll just have to read them!

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hahah yea I will have to read them! Did you post your Fluttershy one on here as well?

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Yes, that's the spirit.

I never liked Zecora and i'm pretty sure if they added any more zebras I wouldn't like them either.

I never liked Sapphire Shores and i'm pretty sure if they added any more mules I wouldn't like them either.

I never liked Cranky Doodle and i'm pretty sure if they added any more donkeys I wouldn't like them either.

I never liked Iron Will and i'm pretty sure if they added any more minotaurs I wouldn't like them either.

I never liked Discord and i'm pretty sure if they added any more Draconequui I wouldn't like them either.

I never liked this one black guy and i'm pretty sure if I saw any more walking around I wouldn't like them, either.

You and I are pretty similar people, huh?

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Hahahah this made me cry. I don't think that's what he was going for, but I get what your saying. Guilda is the only Griffon we've even heard of, we don't even know if there are any other griffons. But we can make the assumption that all Griffons are mean and stuck up, because the only statistics we have on that species is based on one Griffon. :rainbowlaugh:

Looks like the end came.

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