Just the average brony from south Texas. 17 years of age and practically the only brony at school ;~; nonetheless I express myself and love and tolerate most.
Alone...thats all I've ever been as far as I know. I was born with some not-so-natural abilities that the orphanage I was raised in was not so fond of. I'm heading to a small town, named Ponyville, with nothing but a train ticket and the scarf around my neck, in search of a place that will hopefully be more accepting of what I have to hide...
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wow hiding in luggage and telling hi to huh and zipping it back up....seems like something that pinkie would do
Well that was great for your first! I don't write but I read a lot of them. And as far as ideas go? You could make it start off like the show. You know ! Have them meet pinkie who then gasps and zips off only later to throw a party because their new and then proceed to meet the rest of the main six but keep your thoughts drifting back to that pink mare. Who happens to show up rousing you from sleep..... We're ever that may be. P.s. I'm a huge pinkie pie fan so I'm voting for the romance to go along with her!
3278109 thanks for the feed back
and I'm pretty sure i have that crazy mare involved somewhere in here... But i guess you'll all have to stick around to find out.
Another good chapter and you could always start the next chapter with a strang pink mare gasping and then end the chapter with a party
Yeah their really good quality and you even trough a song in there! That's a plus In my book. And you Got pinkie pie in there to! I love this story so much and I'm really interested to see where you take this story.
but one thing. You called echo a bronie? 
you sir just made my day! Anywho just let me know if you ever want help with this story, I'd love to be a part of this.
3357572 At this point, I will gladly accept any help I can get
PM me in anything you're interested in helping with 
Now of all your chapters could be this long that would be great! Also I noticed quite a few grammar errors in this chapter, but other then that you seem to be introducing new characters at a nice rate. You even seem to have Pinkies personality down .......... As I'm possible as that is.
But love the story and the ending of this chapter! Keep up the good work! /)
3504799 Sadly, I had half the chapter typed up with more Echo dialogue, but my progress was deleted and I felt like I made you guys wait long enough...
Wow! Just wow! That was so well written that I can't really say anything bad about this one. I'm impressed. You even managed to make a romantic relationship that didn't feel rushed. /)
St resist joke ........ Loved this chapter just like all the others bro /)
Reading through I found a couple of errors like a lower case "I" and a missing t in at near the end but I still loved the story.