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Mix Tape hate Mondays

The dreaded Monday has arrived, and everything is going wrong for Mix Tape. Could this get any worse? Well, what happens when the outrageously, obnoxiously pink pony known as Pinkie Pie comes into the picture? Trouble, with a dash of crazy

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SigmaAtlas

SigmaAtlas #1 · Aug 16th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Although Pinky would probably be a character I would dislike too, I feel pretty bad. I don't know, I can tell the difference between people who are actually annoying or just happy. But I guess Monday's bring the worst of us.

Pretty good story, I will look out for more chapters. Other then recommending that you put a OC in your character listing, and that you indent on paragraphs, everything is good. Words flow nicely, and fluently. Good Job!

Prane

Prane #2 · Aug 17th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Mix Tape, why won't you make the store open Tue-Sat and make Monday a day off?

I look forward to see where it goes - stories like these tend to go crazier every subsequent chapter, at least until the end of the day occurs (in the form of armaggedon or not). I secretly hope that Mix Tape's day will be completely ruined in a 'good' way, amusing way, via interactions with the Ponyville intellectual elite. And I agree with things SigmaAtlas said regarding indentations and OC tag. All in all, nicely done!

Mix_Tape_2009

Mix_Tape_2009 #3 · Aug 20th, 2013 · · ·

Thanks so much for the extremely helpful comments. The second chapter is well underway at this moment. The reason for her keeping Monday open is because at the moment, she is slightly behind on some bills, namely electric. Also, keep in mind that the reason she is not doing well is because mainly of her not taking the anti-psychotics.