Hehe... I want to edit it like 3 more times, but I also want to get this section over with and get to some new chapters that I haven't actually written yet. And also I'm working on 2 (maybe 3 now) other stories, and college... Then there's the things I'm actually trying to read and the other thing I'm listening to... I always over plan.
Because I over plan, I feel like I'm rushing things... I mean, sure, each story is edited 3 times minimum before it is released, but I don't think those are enough times...
(Whoas of a writer)
...
I don't know why I wrote this comment...

And so the shit hits the fan with the force of a sledgehammer.

3151857 Basically, but hasn't quite scattered yet.

3151861 As for your pic "HA! Jokes on you I don't have a soul."

3151933 ... Maybe that's cause I ate it already

3152034 *activates x-ray vision* Theirs no way you already ate my- holy shit.

good chapter

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Haha!

3152050 Thanks ^_^ (Still 3 chapters to go, at least Don't know if my mind will make it...)

3152075 im still suerprised scootaloo forgave dash for the factory and stuff

3152081 Would she really want to leave the "sister" she truly admired for so long? Also, when I read the Rainbow Factory, I never get the feeling Scootaloo hated Dash for what she did. The story never mentioned such hate.

Scootaloo brought her chin high, still demanding even the tiniest fraction of dignity.
“You have beautiful eyes,” she cooed, soft, yet clearly.

I think she had excepted that Rainbow Dash had been corrupted by her work here and kind of felt pity for the crazy Dash. (I guess. If you want me to explain it better, I can try)

3152144 ok i have the feeling ur right tho i dont thank ill ever read rainbow factory again but thanks for explanning that

3152160 lol, a better explanation will probably be in the Afterwords Extras

Let me admit now. I am kind of bad/horrible at fight scenes... You have been warned.
Though I do have to admit that this battle is getting me quite excited/eager. I wish to get it out ASAP! (Doing too many stories at once to determine when I can finish this and upload it... Sorry)

I must apologize about the delays, most of my time has been put into college and this.
Once again, I'm sorry, but the next chapter still needs to be edited and I'm unable to do so at the moment. I do believe I can get it out by October's End though.
Edit: *Sigh* Stupid Life being so distracting...

i like this

3523968 Thank you