Comet once had a great life with a loving family and a new sister, however after a few events things started to go downhill until that fateful day.
Comet had now spent the best part of 4 years in the Everfree forest hunting for food and trying to find away out of the never ending tree's and monsters, but one day a Timberwolve attack winds him up back in civilization and with great results too.
After saving her life from the Timberwolves Twilight Sparkle has to decide how far she will go to help out the colt that has helped her out so much already.
Chapters (3)
well this chapter made me cry a little good job
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thanks for the feedback matt, i hope i didn't make it too plain, i will update these chapters quickly and should probably have the forth up by tomorrow
Nothing big just several times you used an i instead of I . otherwise not bad.
3058179 haha, ya i was ment to do an edit sweep of this story but i got swept up into making another one that i forgot to
Applejack or Pink Pie but not rarity ok
3077459 ok, i wasn't going to choose rarity, i can't deal with her accent throughout the entire story
3077466 OK good luck
moving a little fast but I'm enjoying it all the same
3083000 thanks for the feedback i do understand the story might be moving too fast in the beginning but i will start to pace it out more when i get round to continuing the story
i guess twilight dosen't think comet is so sweet anymore :P
3092667 ha, ya this story is riddled with errors, will go over it after i'm done with the other stories
Me like. Please make more!
Score: 5/5 mustaches
3119180 i will this weekend
3119182 uhhh cant wait
i just love you storys its on my favs 
3120321 any chance of an update about the, update?
3219374 it will be this weekend because I will finish my main story by then and I can get to finishing off this and some other work
3219448 think you, kind sir
Another great story by you! You are a great writer! I love this. As with all your other stories!
Damn, you're a good writer. Just sometimes your grammar makes my eye twitch, but thats okay xD