• Member Since 21st Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen Jun 9th, 2019

Tamar


I live in the UK, and have been at university in Devon since September 2011. My home is near London, and I first started watching My Little Pony in February 2011.

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When Applebloom is sick in bed, she asks Applejack to read her a story. Not having any books to hand, Applejack decides to invent a story for her, in the style of Just So Stories.

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Comments ( 11 )

Such a nice story. Will you be adding more to it? Tracking if you are.

Well done. Origin stories are always a bit of a gamble, but this one worked out very well.

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Nice,
only thing is that I felt a little lack of flow at the beginning of the story.

Well done.

I wish I could write applejack's accent :raritycry:

I approve of this

THis was pretty good:pinkiehappy:

Ponyfiction + Rudyard Kipling stories?
:heart::yay::heart:
In my opinion, this should be featured.
But the best layed plans....
Ah well. Next I'm half expecting the Pasture Book or Gelding Din!
:raritywink:

that was really good :heart:

I really liked this! I didn't expect the whole 'fell in love with a cloud' thing at all. Plus, Granny Smith at the end made me smile :heart:
Tracking!

240843 Glad you liked it. Yes, I will, when I think of more stories for Applejack to tell :scootangel:

I'd love to see sequels where AJ tells her version of Equestria's history.:ajsmug:

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