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Sun Kissed

When a being finds him self in love with a Princess he is unsure of what do to. He trys to fight his true nature as she pulls at the frozen strings in his heart. It wont be long until one of them ends up regretting their actions. Boiling it down we are all just animals, some a more violent breed.
"I have loved to the point of madness; that which is called madness, that which to me, is the only sensible way to love" - Francois Sangon

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SpaceCommie

SpaceCommie #1 · Aug 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Who the hell is the protagonist?

CosmicWaltz

CosmicWaltz #2 · Aug 4th, 2013 · · ·

Well, with no true allusion as to whom the protagonist is and with no clear sense of a frame of reference, I feel this may be hindered as a fanfic. This is without mentioning the grammar, tense, and spelling errors throughout. These nagging concerns aside, however, I must say that the flourishing imagery and poetry in this are simply marvelous. I was pulled throughout with a desire to know more, not just for the fact itself, but to read how it would make itself known through the words. Tragically, that never came to light, either through intention of oversight. Not bad by a long shot, but definitely a work of poetry over fiction.