Equestrian Monster Hunters

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Raiinification

Raiinification #4 · Jul 31st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1: The Orphanage (intro) ·

Dude, don't listen to these people, your story is going well, and honestly if you need/want help feel free to ask. I really like this story so far, and would be happy to share my ideas on this....but it's cool if you want to solo it, I'll read every one, and be honest. Anyways good luck.

Vv_-Carnelian-_vV

Vv_-Carnelian-_vV #5 · Jul 31st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1: The Orphanage (intro) ·

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Thank you, I have to admit I was up till around... Let's say 1:43 am writing this so I was afraid that I was too tired to make it good.

Edit: Also, yes... yes I would very much love help... solo is EVIL!!!

Raiinification

Raiinification #6 · Jul 31st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1: The Orphanage (intro) ·

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Awesome! I didn't really find any errors....yet, and for a late night story it was well made, except for the end...you can tell you're tired by the lack of detail, and depth of the characters....also is there some place where we could talk about this not in the comment area?

Vv_-Carnelian-_vV

Vv_-Carnelian-_vV #7 · Jul 31st, 2013 · · · Chapter 1: The Orphanage (intro) ·

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Yea, hold on.

Dragonis999

Dragonis999 #8 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1: The Orphanage (intro) ·

2969370 i agree with raiinification while i don't know what the others said for doing this a like 1 am it's pretty damn good so continue on with it as it's a concept iv'e never seen before an i d o like a new perspective on things