Hello, my name is Author Tempus. I am here to recount a terrifying tale that happened right here in Ponyville. I, of course, am the one who saves everypony.
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Sounds like the movie "Killer Condom..." but with hooves...
...Killer Condom wasn't very good...
Have to be honest... the random tag doesn't excuse everything.
I dunno. It moved so fast, didn't spend any time building up or telling much of any real jokes... the title was misleading as the socks controlled minds and didn't eat their hooves... the addition of Trixie was out of left field and she had no motivation to get revenge on ALL of Equestria...
Maybe I need to lighten up, but I dunno, I just didn't laugh at it. It just wasn't novel enough or subverting enough or funny enough to get me to laugh.
To be honest, I thought it would be more exciting. Add a bit more detail, fix your writing, make paragraphs. Yeah, not as easy as it sounds. And also, add more emotion! Please dude? Not to be mean, trying to make your stories a bit better.
It's...interesting. It all seemed a little rushed, but good concept.
Although, I love socks!