Like mother like daughter. Princess Skyla wants to take a vacation on earth, by swapping bodies with a human, but can only find a guy. Looks like he's going to have to deal with being a Princess for a few days...
Just like the last guy, his thoughts keep going back to sex. I feel like it's a lot harder to NOT think about it if you're a perverted guy or even an inch of pervertedness. ^^;
63 clop? BORING! We already saw it in original story. Do more character development and add some details to the world. Let character explore this world. Human`s perspective must be unque for this.
I loved it all it had a lot of funny parts in it and of course Luminare is Blueblood son now I see it.And I can just who his mom is .And it was great getting to know Skyla's family I little more and get to know what her sibs are like.And Luminare I don't know if he knows it but he's getting them closer and closer that it's going to be hard going back to earth and leavening him.And Skyla I'm sorry to say that that will not be the last time that will happen it was just the first it's just a matter of time before it happens again.I can't wait to see what happens next to them and that was a good first clop scene and can't wait to see where this fic heads next.
3906763 I have no idea what you are talking about. She realized what she was doing long before she finished. As for why it took her so long to admit it, it's because she was denying what was happening.
Hooray, someone used monster reborn on one of my favorite fics \o/. It isn't dead anymore, Quickly! Someone better buff it to keep it out on the field XD
Good chapter, but seeing this repeatedly drove me up the wall. Masturbate. I'm not saying it to be mean, but if you're old enough to write about it, at least spell it right.
4009852 Thank you for your comments. I enjoy getting feedback. ^_^
With that being said though, we learned nothing about the life of NS? We learned he works at a pizza joint, was in high school rather recently, and is rather poor. The only thing we learned about the protagonist of the original story is that he had a girlfriend and a big screen TV. I honestly don't think that's fair to say here.
Also, this is a prologue, not a beginning chapter. They are meant to be short, and this one is far longer then it should be already. As for the transformation scene, it's very similar to the one in the original story, so I didn't see too much reason to rehash it and just tried to get it out of the way.
Also, it was great to see NS take her time to learn her new body mechanics, instead of just instantly knowing how to walk. Though she might have caught on a tad too quick. Either way, a very good chapter.
I can't say much about this right now, but there is a reason for it.
I liked the talk about all skyla's siblings. Though I'm now wondering if cadance isn't pregnant. I know twilight made that spell, but shining promised her.
Anyway, I look forward to further story and skyla learning more about how she really feels about Lumy. Yeah, it don't take a rocket scientist to see she's starting to like him, no matter how much she denies it. Cadance knows just what I mean
Despite that bit of clop, I will favourite this story and you have a follower so I will be alerted to when you update.
Just, please, not too many clop scenes. The less the better
4181721 Eh, it's kinda the best you didn't wait till 'The End' because the rate this story gets updated, that could be a year. I'm not happy about it, but I'm also not in a position where I can write freely right now, and don't know when I will be.
As for the other comments, clop will happen only when I feel like putting it in the story. If I want to put it in, I am, so I apologize now, but it'll happen again. However it's highly unlikely you'll see it as often as you did in the original story.
The Shining/Cadance pregnancy thing. Luminare said it best: Even for a Prince and Princess, raising a foal isn't cheap. He may have promised her that, but in reality, even they can't just keep popping them out that quickly and be able to afford the time and money it takes to care for them. So yeah, they plan enough time in between.
ok I know it has ben something like 9 mounts cense you have posted a new chapter , but I will say this if this was your first clop attempt on paper you nailed it really well. do not cell your self short you have a ton of talent you just need to trust your self and let it happen.
“Because my mother can be an idiot.” With a sigh he continued.
Mother confirmed to be The Stupid and Jealous Trixie.
Yuck! That tasted nasty! How in the world did ponies do this?
Seems like a cheap bathroom to me if it has a shower/tub combo. Most nice, big bathrooms have an amazing tub and a shower set into the wall.
Well, you have something going here, but then that was like over half a year ago. Poor forgotten story. Though, even now I am getting the feeling Skyla will end up with an identical twin.
All I really needed to learn was my ‘family’ which was a lot larger than I had ever thought one could be.
“And these are my two younger brothers, who are older than Eros?”
I guess you're taking what Shining said in the epilogue of the previous story to its full meaning? Lots of "baby bulges"... I guess that makes sense, plenty of literary freedom with more characters, after all. Also, you have a spelling error at the end of what I quoted. Sounds like a double genderswap of Discord's name, honestly.
“Because my mother can be an idiot.” With a sigh he continued. “When my mother heard that Twilight Sparkle made such a spell, she was determined that she could do it too. Except hers didn’t have a time limit. I think Twilight is trying to find a way to counter it even now.”
I'm going to venture a guess that Luminare's mom is Trixie Lulamoon, because she's likely the only unicorn I know of in the show stupid enough to try to outmatch Twilight Sparkle's magical skill.
Man, why did the water feel so hot? I thought it was suppose to get colder the longer you were in. Surely the laws of physics applied to this world right? Well maybe not all of them, but that had to be consistent at least. This heat was causing my breathing to become irregular, which didn’t make it any easier to clean myself. Was that my tail standing straight up? Odd, but it did make cleaning back there easier. Might as well get it over with.
I believe it's called "going into heat" for a reason. Twisted Code *begins picturing Skyla in the shower and he, how shall we say, begins reacting* get your mind out of the gutter, Twisted. Twisted Code: " What? You didn't see anything..." Uh huh...
Author's Note:
For some reason this story is proving hard to actually get out. I had originally wanted it much longer then this, but it just didn't work out. It's frustrating, because I know what I WANT to happen, I just can't get it on digital paper. >_<
I think that's typically called "writers block"... fortunately I'm backlogged, so it doesn't bother me
“Because my mother can be an idiot.” With a sigh he continued. “When my mother heard that Twilight Sparkle made such a spell, she was determined that she could do it too. Except hers didn’t have a time limit. I think Twilight is trying to find a way to counter it even now.”
I stand by my previously-stated conjecture about who the mother is. It's got to be Trixie. Although I also see that she wasn't meant to be mentioned here?
Just like the last guy, his thoughts keep going back to sex. I feel like it's a lot harder to NOT think about it if you're a perverted guy or even an inch of pervertedness. ^^;
Good show, definitely not worth the wait but only by length did I find fault. Well done.
By the way, who was on top blueblood or trixie? With both of thier egos they probably both wanted it :p
Good clop my chap! Tally hoe and what not! Keep up the good work here!
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Actually that part about his mother got cut from the chapter. Thought I had taken out all references to it. See I missed one.
3905196 well oops i guess? leave to me to find a mistake while making a joke :P
63 clop? BORING! We already saw it in original story. Do more character development and add some details to the world. Let character explore this world. Human`s perspective must be unque for this.
I loved it all it had a lot of funny parts in it and of course Luminare is Blueblood son now I see it.And I can just who his mom is .And it was great getting to know Skyla's family I little more and get to know what her sibs are like.And Luminare I don't know if he knows it but he's getting them closer and closer that it's going to be hard going back to earth and leavening him.And Skyla I'm sorry to say that that will not be the last time that will happen it was just the first it's just a matter of time before it happens again.I can't wait to see what happens next to them and that was a good first clop scene and can't wait to see where this fic heads next.
I find it a bit far fetched that she'd finish before realizing what she'd accidentally started doing, but I will admit that it was hillarius.
All in all, good chapter!
...Just please don't take quite as long on the next one.
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I have no idea what you are talking about. She realized what she was doing long before she finished. As for why it took her so long to admit it, it's because she was denying what was happening.
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Actually we only got 'Cadance' trying to satisfy herself with a banana before going for the 'real thing' We didn't get a scene like this.
why have you been gone?
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Ohhhh...
Then I get it.
No worries, I'm just glad to see this story hasn't been banished to the graveyard of the unfinished. :-)
Hooray, someone used monster reborn on one of my favorite fics \o/. It isn't dead anymore, Quickly! Someone better buff it to keep it out on the field XD
Fingernail.
Good chapter, but seeing this repeatedly drove me up the wall. Masturbate. I'm not saying it to be mean, but if you're old enough to write about it, at least spell it right.
Otherwise, I am glad to see this back on track.
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Well having to wait forever for the cakes to get Pound to not be a statue drove me up the wall, so I guess we're even. :P
(In all seriousness, I can't believe I made that mistake. It's fixed)
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To late! I summon Blue eyes white dragon!
3936491 NUUU, I USE TRAP HOLE! You will not take this fic from me DX!
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Again, you are too late! For I have summoned Exodius: THE ULTIMATE FORBIDDEN LORD!
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Welp that did it. I quit writing. It's both of your faults.
A satisfying chapter.
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Noooooo!
I end the duel by forfeiting! You have to continue the story!
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Thank you for your comments. I enjoy getting feedback. ^_^
With that being said though, we learned nothing about the life of NS? We learned he works at a pizza joint, was in high school rather recently, and is rather poor. The only thing we learned about the protagonist of the original story is that he had a girlfriend and a big screen TV. I honestly don't think that's fair to say here.
Also, this is a prologue, not a beginning chapter. They are meant to be short, and this one is far longer then it should be already. As for the transformation scene, it's very similar to the one in the original story, so I didn't see too much reason to rehash it and just tried to get it out of the way.
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I can't say much about this right now, but there is a reason for it.
So luminaries mother is trixie or is this just a theory?
I liked the talk about all skyla's siblings. Though I'm now wondering if cadance isn't pregnant. I know twilight made that spell, but shining promised her.
Anyway, I look forward to further story and skyla learning more about how she really feels about Lumy. Yeah, it don't take a rocket scientist to see she's starting to like him, no matter how much she denies it. Cadance knows just what I mean
Despite that bit of clop, I will favourite this story and you have a follower so I will be alerted to when you update.
Just, please, not too many clop scenes. The less the better
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Eh, it's kinda the best you didn't wait till 'The End' because the rate this story gets updated, that could be a year. I'm not happy about it, but I'm also not in a position where I can write freely right now, and don't know when I will be.
As for the other comments, clop will happen only when I feel like putting it in the story. If I want to put it in, I am, so I apologize now, but it'll happen again. However it's highly unlikely you'll see it as often as you did in the original story.
The Shining/Cadance pregnancy thing. Luminare said it best: Even for a Prince and Princess, raising a foal isn't cheap. He may have promised her that, but in reality, even they can't just keep popping them out that quickly and be able to afford the time and money it takes to care for them. So yeah, they plan enough time in between.
the clop wasn't that bad in fact I found it quite funny. This was the first time the guy actually touched his lady bits. That in itself was funny
ok I know it has ben something like 9 mounts cense you have posted a new chapter , but I will say this if this was your first clop attempt on paper you nailed it really well.
do not cell your self short you have a ton of talent you just need to trust your self and let it happen.
I'd be reading this story if just it were able to stay updated.
Mother confirmed to be The Stupid and Jealous Trixie.
Seems like a cheap bathroom to me if it has a shower/tub combo. Most nice, big bathrooms have an amazing tub and a shower set into the wall.
Well, you have something going here, but then that was like over half a year ago. Poor forgotten story. Though, even now I am getting the feeling Skyla will end up with an identical twin.
That means Blueblood had a son when he had a threesome with Shining and the poor, confused human... I mean Cadance.
hey can you send me a link when you up date this
I guess you're taking what Shining said in the epilogue of the previous story to its full meaning? Lots of "baby bulges"... I guess that makes sense, plenty of literary freedom with more characters, after all. Also, you have a spelling error at the end of what I quoted. Sounds like a double genderswap of Discord's name, honestly.
I'm going to venture a guess that Luminare's mom is Trixie Lulamoon, because she's likely the only unicorn I know of in the show stupid enough to try to outmatch Twilight Sparkle's magical skill.
I believe it's called "going into heat" for a reason.
Twisted Code *begins picturing Skyla in the shower and he, how shall we say, begins reacting*
get your mind out of the gutter, Twisted.
Twisted Code: " What? You didn't see anything..."
Uh huh...
I think that's typically called "writers block"... fortunately I'm backlogged, so it doesn't bother me
I stand by my previously-stated conjecture about who the mother is. It's got to be Trixie. Although I also see that she wasn't meant to be mentioned here?
"In other news, this is my first ever 'clop' scene. So... I apologize if it sucks."
They say after I read some of the nicest clop I've ever read
No seriously pls come back and finish this story and don't even worry about how "bad" or "good" it is.
Signed: someone relieved that the clop aligns with their tastes for once unlike 95% of clop writing on here