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Hmm, perhaps Kestral should get to know Seeth somehow? Could be interesting to have him expand his circle of friends somewhat, also, is Luna must be pretty confident in his abilities when she starts 'assisting' this much in 'catching' him.
I have a feeling that Pinkie Pie will cause much trouble to him.
Great story!
That moment you realize.... he left his boots at the house.
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I figured that at this point it could be assumed that he takes his clothes off magically unless otherwise stated.
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Thanks!
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I actually don't have any planned interactions with Pinkie, as much as I'd like to. I just don't know how I'd set up the initial meeting between the two, unless I just made Luna ask him to, which seems too risky for whatever reward I could think of.
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I actually thought about having some more interaction between the two at the end, but I figured it would cross the line between 'protecting/helping' and 'telling people how to live'.
6290447 True.
Nice.
Good, keep being alive so you can update :)
I can imagine using the vocal manipulator to make his voice scarier. Also, the guard catching him doesn't seem likely, though I imagine it will happen eventually so the author has more material to advance the plot.
not the best at proof reading(just read one chapter of either of my stories) but i'm quite sure this is a mistake
replace make with made
or maybe i'm still as stupid as some people think i am..
Any time he encounters a guard he needs to make all of them sound like that Doberman from the movie UP when they talk. Nothing but high pitched squeaks screaming, "Halt!, Stop!, Surrender!" and the like.
And to think that I had an idea similar to this story that I've been bouncing around to myself over the past few days before finding out about this story (which is amazing, by the way, complete and utter props on how well done it is), just instead of a pseudo-criminal fugitive on the run brought in to open a can of whoop-ass on some rogue Changelings, it was an NRO field operative with a suit of power armor and some other futuristic sciency-mumbo-jumbo being brought in by his own Magic Mac-guffin and Deus ex Machina to open a similar can....
This story just gave me the courage to make it, instead of shelving it into a list of brainstormed ideas that have been piling up for the past three years, and now have promps numbering in the thousands...
I should probably do something with them, something more than collecting cyber-dust...
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Well, thank you for allowing me to be an inspiration; It's an honor. I'll drop on your page and check it out sometime.
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Thank you for pointing out errors. Some of those were made a year ago and I still haven't caught them.
6305495 HALO series. The protagonist in most of the games is a SPARTAN code-named Sierra-117. Hence the Room 117 having some spartan accommodations.
6336445 That isnt what i was talking about... Why do they care about normal stone eggs? Why would they have a stone egg?
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That pun was bad and you should feel bad.
A quarter mile is not that far away. One lap around a standard size track is a quarter mile. Maybe increase that to half a mile or a mile?
7009156 Pretty far In a city though.
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Is it? Cause I feel like thats 5-6 streets max.
Either way I only pointed it out for the sake of realism, and looking back on it, it's a bit picky for a fimfic.