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You know I have to wonder, if Luna figures out that what Kestral does is a good thing, (which sorta happens in this chapter) I wonder if she's going to 'aid' him with tips, info, or other things?
Out of all of this, one thing stood out to me...
That is one friggin' awesome fish.
Just what the hell are the eggs for? I've been trying to figure it out since Luna saw the first one, but for the life of me the only idea I got was they were a gift from someone close to the Royal Sisters from a long ass time ago. Seriously, I could brush my mustache with my fingers in thought, like most people with a do, and still not be able to come up with anything better than that.
What I'm getting at is: Are we getting close to finding out what the eggs are all about?
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Oh and great chapter and all that other good praise stuff.
My only complaint was that I was hoping the meeting with Luna would happen so we could finally learn about the eggs.
5623746 I bet they are mementoes of their dear friends of the elements of harmony when they used them four eggs four friends
Is "Keep Calm and Flutter On" going to happen in this story? I'd be curious to see what happens when Discord actually has personal shit going on that interferes with helping Kestral. I mean, right now he has literally nothing better to do than track changelings and give Kestral assistance, but that would change if he wasn't in stone anymore.
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She'll become his bestest friend ever. (I'm not 100% sure what I'm going to do with it.)
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The fish is something that just popped into my mind. I liked it, and I thought you guys might too.
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Yes. You're getting close. (Or close -ish.)
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I planned on that taking place after this story. Keep in mind; The events at the Crystal Kingdom haven't happened yet. I've hinted that Shining armor and Cadance have departed to it, but the elements haven't been there.
5624309 ah.
That fish is going to come in handy, I just know it.
So, our intrepid hero now has...a fish? Is it like a babel fish? Can it survive hammerspace? Is it actually an ancient god of awesome?
I wanna knooooooooww~...
Either way, I LOVE IT.
I'm feeling proud of myself for having read this entire story in one day.
Tracking and adding to favorites, without a doubt.
Outstanding work, Jack.
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Yeah. Looking back, I realize subtlety isn't my forte.
Wonderful story, but my question is, will there be- or are there already- side stories revolving around the other human Discord brought over? and if the two will ever meet?
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There are not other stories around the other human, no. They will meet for a short time near the end, but the other human won't be a major role in this story.
Awww. I was wondering what the other human was doing while Kestral was busy in Ponyville, and what he wanted those grenades for.....
Still, your story.
.... though that would make for a good side story, methinks....
Finished reviewing for Goodfic Bin (and also Olympus)
This one was a really close call, but what I'd like is for some grammar and mechanical errors to be sorted out before I let it into the Goodfic Bin. A more detailed review is here.
I also decided to let you story into the Olympus Library, since it easily meets the standards for that group. Shorter explanation is here.
In short, if you could just review some of the mechanical errors, and maybe check some of the other things I mentioned if you can, I'd be more than happy to let it in, so if you do go over it, please PM me.
Is Slicks the murderous goldfish from South Park?
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Freudian slip much?