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Hmm, it's nice to see a pony not being, and pardon my french, racist to a being that isn't a pony.
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I'm pretty sure I used vocabulary that indicated that the Winterhoofs were reindeer. If not, I need to see a doctor about my memory.
4949405 ....Oh, my bad. I guess after reading pony story for so long I sorta imagine ponies replacing characters if I haven't read the previous story from earlier. I'll take back my comment from earlier.
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It's fine. Your point still stands, I was just a little worried that I skipped over an important detail.
They're Reindeer? I must'a missed that line, cause I thought they were ponies too.
4949433 Yeah.
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SUPER SPOILERS AHEAD IF YOU DIDN'T READ UP TO CHAPTER 24 (Cause i don't know how to spoiler
Chapter 24:
4949560 It's not spoiler if you already read it.
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Yeah, but the comments can be seen from the chapter list. Which means newcomers that go through the comments first would see it.
4949608 True once again.
4949366 amen to giving that cliche a hardy fuck you!
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Lol to bad it's a reindeer.
To quote chapter 25
And
One last one
4950407 It's a shame we all use that cliche at times, even I admit to use it once in a while.
4950538 Yeah, sometime my brain forgets that sometime it's not all about ponies.
4950604 Eh it's whatever. I do wish that stereotype would be broken by ponies, but when it is it's usually placed there as part of the story arch. Almost never a random character popping in and helping real quick and leaving. Y'know
4950538 touché good sir, touché.
4950599 so true so fucking true.
4950647 yeah.
4950654 I wish I could say I can change, but then I would be lying. Sigh.
Amazing story and I can't wait to see where this goes.
4955128 *aims my bolter at the offending xeno*
No.
So short! Not even five minutes to read. By the way. I've noticed in past that your story has a bit of a problem switching perspectives. I like the transitions in this chapter, but others felt like they we're lacking. Keep putting practice into third person omniscient writing. Everyone can be good at anything if they try hard enough.
4955477 one of the only good storys on this website and your bitching about chapter length?
Why do kids have to be so. Damned. Cute?!
6575722 Because they're written to be. Kids in fiction usually have all of their obnoxious qualities siphoned out by the writer, like repeating themselves three to five times to make absolutely sure you heard and/or are giving them the reaction they want.
7231852 That or those same traits are exaggerated for comedic effect.