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Next time on Thief: On the Rise, a bucket of excrement hits the industrial fan.
I rather enjoyed this little dream sequence and hope you continue to keep up the good work.
This chapter, I like it...
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Lovin this story.
Really good chapter. It built up the following chapters for me quite nicely and gave kes a believable motavation to his deeds
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Thank you!
I wasn't entirely sure that i was building Kestral up as the character that i had intended, or even as a realistic character at all. If anything, i just have a hard time trying to balance the 'what' of everything with the 'why' of it. Watching him do his stuff is great and all. I just need chapters like this to help push him as a person more than a story element.
Hope you have a good time!
I did have plans of sleeping tonight you bastard. Now I have to read the next chapter.
Sounds like Minecraft. The Overworld at night.
The other human that Discord brought to Equestria is Charlie, right?
5495960 You know, it actually does now that I think about it..
I hope that Charleston gets his balls stuck in a meat grinder.
Poor Kestral...and for his father to have died such a brutal way. I already saw him as a badass. Now I see him as someone who I truly empathize with.
What the Hell would drive Charlie to do something like that? It's one thing to discriminate. It's another to kill innocents. Reminds me of that one kid who helped kick off the Civil Rights movement with his death. I can't remember his name, but for how hurt he was...and the fact that his killers got away with it, even after writing a book on it...sometimes, I hate humanity.
Edit: Ah fuck, I just looked at the other comments. I forgot about my prediction that the other human would be Charles. At first I was hoping it could work out. But now...now Discord needs to keep his hand while pulling a huge bluff on an all-in. I doubt that Discord having Charlie would truly affect Kestral's obligation to protect the innocent, but he definitely won't be happy with the Draconequus.
For some reason the way his father dies gives me a Silent Hill 3 vibe, reminds me of how Harry Mason dies.
*cup hands to mouth*
HYPOCRITE!!
I wonder why he didn't mention the whole thing about staying undercover. That was pretty much the reason that Discord provided as he advised him to kill the changelings.