This is my frist story i hope you like it :3 i dont have cover art yet....
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OK, the characterization seems off, but my major problem with this is, spelling/punctuation/grammar/formatting mistakes. They are everywhere. Please read this site's guide on how to write a story and fix your mistakes. BTW, IIRC, Discord is a draconequus.
Holy Schniekies, you need an editor. Your punctuation and grammar are petrifying, your spelling could frighten off the Third Reich and have every member singing, "Hallelujah", and you didn't even manage to spell the names right!
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Downvoting isn't necessarily hatred. I only do it myself if I believe the story is genuinely badly written. Voting is also needed to help other readers decide whether a story might be worth reading (although you need enough votes on a story before that happens).
I'm not afraid of giving negative constructive criticism, because how else are authors supposed to know where they are going wrong?
2866928 True, but there is a difference between those who downvote upon reading it once, and those who read it again if it's been cleaned up. Not saying you downvote on reading once (although you might,) but you shouldn't judge stories too harshly. I downvote almost never, and advise stories which have poor grammar and spelling.
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Thank you for telling me ^^ i need an editor badly And i knew Discord is a draconequus i just could not spell it
i have been working on my righting skills Thats why i made this so i could have some practice
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Thanks man
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That really hurts You don't have to be so harsh
Edited
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Yo ren! I'm back my computer was brocken, I got a new one, chapter 2 is almost out :D
Thank you for the loving message dear :3c
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You two, thank both of you for like being really chill with me when I was like 13 and writing shitty pony stories, I remember y'alls support meant a lot to me in the day and just wanted to be like yo cause of you guys I kept writing and I do write a decent bit better now, I still suck at it but like I'm not making as MANY spelling errors lmao
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*Beats you up* STOP BULLYING ME