As reality is, ravished by the four inflictions of the Apocalypse, so is Equastria.
The four horses of the Apocalypse are coming to Ponyville to start their thier quest. Why here?
They wish to destroy Equatria. Twilight and her friends must stop them, if they can.
What will happen when they do?
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Read It....its alright.
But I noticed.....WHY THE FUCK does it have 3 dislikes yet NO comments explaining why?
They could have at least explained why and told the author so he could know what to and not to do and what to fix....DAMN!!!
232553 Least you have the decency to tell me it's alright
232558: Thank You.
232767 Wait you are liking it cause I'm a brony ... on a brony site?
Don't like it cause I'm a brony, it don't make sense. I understand the expanding it out, I totally agree with you, I don't like small chapters myself, but I get some proper good places to hang the chapter and I draw to it like bait.
And what you mean "juicy"? ... You mean something like more action, and so forth. Fine. And feel free to object to me thinking you mean sex cause it's not that kind of story. Sorry, if it ain't what you mean.
232793
What he means by juicy is add more description. Detail detail detail!
232802 Fair enough. Last night was all sex tags with a gore sex tag so I'm really sorry for thinking that. But detail. I get it. I'm trying to work it into Chapter 3, which I will also expand on more.
233116 Thanks
I'll take this as a first.
Holy Crap...I WONDER WHatS GOING TO HAPPEN.
So it took so long because I needed to expand it, my first intended stop was about 800 words like the others, but I managed to get it to 1554 words, which is almost double the last chapter, maybe even more than the last two chapters combined.
Anyway, to get so much down just feels great
I'm hoping I have managed to put more detail like people have been asking for. Thank you for your comments, I both think and feel they have helped me a lot. 
Sorry about the delay, for those few who are actually reading this, I'm doubtful that a lot are. I've had things to do but the next chapter is still being worked on, if not slowly, I've not had chance to sit down, relax and blast away with it like I'd prefer.
Regardless of these circumstances I can say that this chapter will be plentiful and I can tell you it's come to 1137 since I last checked. And is still near the beginning of the chapter so I am glad I can keep you this up to date.
Once things have eased a bit and I have that moment I hope I can start to burn through the chapter.
OMG I wanted to get this done 12th April, I got distracted and I RACED against time. I don't now if posting ON 12am 13th counts as making it or not, I'm going to consider it a win to me.
Anyway, from 800, to 1500, to "fun has been double" 3000!! It took 2 months of ...
not doing this story a lot, but now it be a lot more, but we can only hope.
Creative critism always apprciated, as I like to say, "Can't give the crowd what they want if they don't tell you"
Someone might have said something simular to that, but of course they would. Seems common sense to me.
OMG OMG OMG OMG
FINALLY DONE THIS CHAPTER.
This is when it's going to get crazy.
Or maybe just not happy. It's really getting into the sad context of the story.
This is about Death, War, Disease and Famine. I don't think people were expecting a happy story anyway.