A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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I remember when you first started this story, it could have gone any different number of directions, and now that its at the 200,000 word count I still have no idea, you're awesome for that and i will avidly continue to read until the end :D
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And beyond?
this story has so much potential to become the best fimfic i've ever read, theres so many looming elements that need to be discussed and dealt with: the changlings trying to "rescue" gel, rhino still hasnt proposed, and gel still needs to persuade all of the residents of ponyville to help her cause, get peace for the changings, and end all of the hate.
come on, cant we all just get along?
Well, there goes another opportunity for some drama. While I'm glad Silk feels remorseful about what she did to Gel, I can't help but feel unsatisfied with Gel's reaction. Maybe it's the fact that she's a Changeling and, therefore, wouldn't want to feel any negative emotions in the situation, but I feel like she forgave Silk for being a
shitlordbad boss a little too easily.However, now that some semblance of a friendship has been salvaged between the two of them, one has to wonder if Silk Tease (goddammit, I actually had to go back and find her surname ) is now an option in terms of character witnesses if Twilight's upcoming security network outs Gel as a Changeling before the happy couple is ready. Or even after.
Sounds like a nice view.
I cannot wait to celebrate the big 50 chapter milestone
Coincidently I tried looking up 'swimming changeling' and couldn't find anything. I wanted to subsitute for a picture of a swimming bee but most of them are relatively bad. But hey! There's a nice niche for aspiring artwork through this fic
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Maybe....... Glad someone got what I was talking about though.
'He nods. "Well, yes, but bones can be dense too. I've carried you so I know you don't way too much... but it's the net amount of liquids less dense than water plus the gases inside you that determine if you float or not. So... what are your insides like, for lack of a better way to say that." '
the correct word is weighs
great story started on sequel before this
p.s. this was a random correction, sorry
I loved it I'm so happy that Gel and Silk are friends again.And I truly hope that Silk finds someone that loves and threats her right like Rhino threats Gel.And I can't wait to see what the cats will be up to when they see each other again.And I'm happy that the swm lesson went well.I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens to them all next.
Why are there so many ellipsis'? it's just painful.
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Because she stutters. It would be hard to tell if she was stuttering or not if there were no breaks in the sentence.
Aww, they're friends again.
And even if Gel wasn't buoyant, she could just give her body more volume or gas filled organs.
Cya
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Behold Mittens, the amazing transgender kitten!
To be honest, though, I'm ashamed that it took me three read-throughs to realize that Mittens had been gender-swapped in this chapter. The only reason I realized it was when I thought how odd it was that Mittens was a male calico, which made me remember that Mittens was female in previous chapters.
Don't worry hun, we all mess up sometimes...
*Grabs my gun to punish her for her crimes*
(I'm kidding tho, forgiving is important)