Is it gonna be a different stallion for each of the Mane 6 or just Flash Sentry geting lucky with all 6? If it is Flash with all 6 be kinda funny if, even with contraceptives, atleast some ended up pregnant anyway.
3060209 And I believe you mean "assess". Though your way has funnier implications.
As far as this chapter goes, it wasn't bad. Not fantastic, but not bad. There was one line, however, that absolutely made it for me, though, and that was when Twilight's wingboner kept her from walking through the doorway. I can just picture her trying to sidle out sideways after that.
I don't exactly support the FlashLight couple, but this is extremely well written, and I respect you, sir. Please, keep writing. I look forward to more.
(Randomly bursts through door in bedroom.) "Hi, my name is Thom, Thom Lulentine. Here we have what I like to call a very well written fic. But not just any, a very well written clop fic. A clop fic is--" "What the BUCK!!?" Shouted Flash. The guard raised himself from the bed as he stood in a defensive stance in front of Twilight. "Relax stud bud, I'm just merely breaking the wall here. As I was saying, a clop fic is--" "THOM!! Get your ass back here, stop jumping into other people's stories." Shouted a an enraged Guy. "UGH FINE!!!" Thom made his way out the bedroom door with his head hung down in disappointment. A few seconds pass before he poked his head back out to leave one more statement. "Always use protective sex boys and girls. One may not be experienced enough in the sexual field as you but that doesn't mean you can't be prepared. Oh, by the way. She's pregnant with your holy child. Tootaloo bitcharoos!!" Thom said before comedic-ally dashing back down the hallway. Leaving the Princess and Royal guard to question their reality.
3086795 It's actually a thing they're working on in the real world. Something that changes a hormone used in sperm production so that he's temporarily infertile. It takes a few weeks to take effect, though. But never mind that, this is Equestria - there's probably a contraception potion that takes effect immediately.
Nice awkwardness you build there. Though I was constantly groaning at Twilight's book mode never going away until Flash found out. I was at the point that I'd loved to slap her square with that thing to stop her from thinking all the time.
And so the fun begins!
It's a strange feeling when you realize that you'd rather read about some OC bangin twilight then "flash sentry".
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Fuckin' Flash Sentry (the Defiant). I can no longer listen to that song without thinking of his character, and it's driving me insane.
Is it gonna be a different stallion for each of the Mane 6 or just Flash Sentry geting lucky with all 6? If it is Flash with all 6 be kinda funny if, even with contraceptives, atleast some ended up pregnant anyway.
I believe you meant asses the situation?
Yeah... Twilight through this entire chapter..
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NEXT!!!
3060209 And I believe you mean "assess". Though your way has funnier implications.
As far as this chapter goes, it wasn't bad. Not fantastic, but not bad. There was one line, however, that absolutely made it for me, though, and that was when Twilight's wingboner kept her from walking through the doorway. I can just picture her trying to sidle out sideways after that.
I hate Flash. I hate him for reasons I don't know of.
But this was funny. I liked.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Am I the only guy here who actually likes Flash Sentry?
3060869 I think Flash is pretty chill.
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On the internet, you're never the only one.
Finally! Some FlashLight clop
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For a character who has a next-to-nothing personality,I think "chill" it's a bit fair,I guess.
There's a petition about saving Flash Sentry right here http://www.change.org/petitions/hasbro-studios-and-dhx-media-vancouver-save-flash-sentry.
Ahm liking this! keep going!
LOVE THIS!
How Detailed lol
I don't exactly support the FlashLight couple, but this is extremely well written, and I respect you, sir. Please, keep writing. I look forward to more.
(crashes into the first chapter) This fits more, I think.
Maybe.
(Randomly bursts through door in bedroom.) "Hi, my name is Thom, Thom Lulentine. Here we have what I like to call a very well written fic. But not just any, a very well written clop fic. A clop fic is--"
"What the BUCK!!?" Shouted Flash. The guard raised himself from the bed as he stood in a defensive stance in front of Twilight.
"Relax stud bud, I'm just merely breaking the wall here. As I was saying, a clop fic is--"
"THOM!! Get your ass back here, stop jumping into other people's stories." Shouted a an enraged Guy.
"UGH FINE!!!" Thom made his way out the bedroom door with his head hung down in disappointment. A few seconds pass before he poked his head back out to leave one more statement.
"Always use protective sex boys and girls. One may not be experienced enough in the sexual field as you but that doesn't mean you can't be prepared. Oh, by the way. She's pregnant with your holy child. Tootaloo bitcharoos!!" Thom said before comedic-ally dashing back down the hallway. Leaving the Princess and Royal guard to question their reality.
Nice, well done mate. Cheerio
This is what expect from a good clopfic: comedy gold
I think you mean assess, here.
Huh.
Oh, poor Twilight. Don't worry, hon, it could be worse.
It could've been Cosmarepolitan. *shudders at the general quality of any of that recycled advice*
I actually read of a drug that is being developed with no side effects that is a male contraceptive.
nex time Twilight, read the karma sutra.
Isn't that just like Twilight. When in doubt, read a book. When not in doubt, still read a book.
They make contraceptive for guys?
Seemslegit.3086795
It's actually a thing they're working on in the real world. Something that changes a hormone used in sperm production so that he's temporarily infertile. It takes a few weeks to take effect, though. But never mind that, this is Equestria - there's probably a contraception potion that takes effect immediately.
3058496 Or her brother.
Nailed it.
GENIUS!
Why so frustrated? You said it, no going back now
This probably should be reworded.
Nice awkwardness you build there.
Though I was constantly groaning at Twilight's book mode never going away until Flash found out.
I was at the point that I'd loved to slap her square with that thing to stop her from thinking all the time.
Dragon