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Kori Kitsune


The Kitsune who's having a blast every minute of his day.

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Queen Chrysalis has been the one responsible for the lives of thousands of her own subjects since birth but was she a volunteer or some other kind who didn't want what she was given?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 27 )

That's something new. Interesting for sure gonna see how it will roll

Okay.. now its strange, I though story was before invasion. Chrysalis act immature. Much to many repeats. Its feels like there should be one more chapter before that one.
I'm just confused

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I was tired and I had an idea stuck in my head. I really do need to execute the new chapter better. :twilightblush:
This is an update as to what the reasons for her being so idiotic during the invasion were.

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I am thinking of including her in Kori's Tale but it is not set in stone yet :rainbowhuh:

Comment posted by Kori Kitsune deleted Jun 15th, 2013

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:rainbowhuh: are you sure about that?

yeah i coulnd not resist to put derpy she is so cute:twilightsmile:


Wait, complete? I though it will be little longer than just 2 chapters

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I'm outta ideas for this story. If you got any I will be glad to hear them and I will put in more chapters if I get any good ideas till then :twilightblush:

Ice

Huh, same name as one of my old fics.

:rainbowhuh:She keeps killing her own... ummmm... this is not the Chrysalis we know.

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Eh :ajbemused: she had to do something to show her hate for the hive and this was an interesting way in my own opinion.

2871029:fluttershysad: But so many changelings dead...
:fluttercry:

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I'm sorry but did you read this story? The hive deserved it in this case.

2871792 Yeah, I read it. I expected them to be demoted or something, not killed!

Just must teach us!

Just must... not correct

GreenRose

Space in this.

Heat to live!

you mean heart?

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You can all feed yourself

yourselves.

Also please continue this.

5619710 reads over comments I had no real plans to continue this or anything on this sight for that fact but I may actually do a complete rewriting of this story seeing how long ago it was written and how much I've changed the way I write since then. Also I know there are bound to be tons of spelling and grammar errors in this since I had no editor for this story and didn't care much about it.

5642652 I see. Might we receive a notification with this story tagged should it be rewritten? I mean write a blog about this and tag it.

5642659 Sure thing! It may be a while before I write any more of this or any of my other stories cough Kori's Tales cough but I will get some more out sometime in the next month or so.

5642666 I would love to converse with you on skype or pm if you like.
Dionysiosbbbb in skype.

5642684 Certainly, I can't really talk right now but in around 24 hours I will be available on skype to talk. Note I don't like to talk much so I won't be vocally talking.

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