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The Darkness Inside

Sombra had it all in life. He was happy and in love yet he was also being attacked by a spirit whom he could not be rid of. All evil has a story and I wish that Sombra's creation was a happy one.

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Rainbow_Flash

Rainbow_Flash #1 · Jul 13th, 2013 · · ·

Could use some fixing, but I love the idea! Okay, the thoughts of Evil!Sombra and Good!Sombra should be italicized, and that's all I can think of.

Salnalus

Salnalus #2 · Jul 13th, 2013 · · ·

First thought for the story: thoughts should be in italics. Otherwise, a pretty decent concept for a story. A little backstory wouldn't have hurt, but it's fine.

Tachyon Xenophile