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It's hard. It's hard to explain what had occurred...there. Words are simply not enough to put into perspective what evils happened there. It changes you, makes you into a completely different pony. It wasn't "progress" that we were doing, it was something else. I had only realized too late...

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Great opening. Got a lot of pontental in this story

Why? I dot get it." I whispered to myself as I looked at my hooves

"Dot" should be "don't."

"Let us put it to a vote now, who agrees we out in motion the Final Solution? Say I."

Everypony in the conference said I

In both instances "I" should be "aye."

We need as much help as we can get!" One f the guards

One of the guards.

You aren't ponies, your devil minions!"

Your wasting my time

"Your" should be "You're."

Now that being a grammar nazi is out of the way, I can get on to my actual comments. Listen ponies, there are much better ways to prove that pegasi are master race. I mean, let's face it, pegasi are obviously master race but there's no need to go around killing the lesser ponies. They can still do things. Building, growing crops, serving drinks, etc. Believe me, I understand what it's like to be blood thirsty, but come on. You need to plan ahead.

Anyways, good chapter. PEGASI = MASTER RACE!!!! :flutterrage:

Indeed Pegasi are the master race, and that is what these ponies are trying to prove. But later in the story you shall see that the Pegasi will make good use out of the lesser beings :pinkiecrazy:

Country in depression
Nation in despair
One man seeking reasons everywhere
Growing hate and anger
The Führer's orders were precise
Who was to be blamed and pay the price!

Wicked propaganda
Turning neighbours into foes
Soldiers of the Third Reich searching homes
And then their former friends are watching
As they are round up one by one
Times of persecutions just begun

Ever since it started
On Kristallnacht '38
When liberty died
And truth was denied
Sent away on trains, sent on a one-way trip to Hell
Enter the gates - Auschwitz awaits!

When freedom burns
The final solution
Dreams fade away and all hope turns to dust
When millions burn
The curtain has fallen
Lost to the world as they perish in flames

There was a country in depression
There was a nation in despair
One man finding reasons everywhere
Then there was raising hate and anger
The Führer's orders still apply
Who was to be blamed and sent to die!

Ever since it started
On Kristallnacht '38
When liberty died
And truth was denied
Sent away on trains, sent on a one-way trip to Hell
Enter the gates - Auschwitz awaits!

When freedom burns
The final solution
Dreams fade away and all hope turns to dust
When millions burn
The curtain has fallen
Lost to the world as they perish in flames

When freedom burns
The final solution
Dreams fade away and all hope turns to dust
When millions burn
The curtain has fallen
Lost to the world as they perish in flames

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