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When the battlestar Alicorn gets assigned a seemingly harmless and uneventful mission that escalades into a event that could lead to the possible nuclear holocaust of all ponies by their greatest enemy, one that they created themselves.

Note: some parts of this story may not make sence if you never watched Battlestar Galactica.
So say we all!

"Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds."- Robert Oppenheimer

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Saw the title, my only thought ---> Dear Kaby

Comment posted by AwkwardTaco deleted May 27th, 2013

I really wanted to like this because I love me some Battlestar. But you've got tense-change problems, punctuation problems... Have you flipped through Ezn's Writing Guide underneath the FAQ? If not, you really should.

Also

Said the cyan mare

Dash ain't cyan, friend, she's sky-blue:
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And why did you make the Alicorn have networked computers? Wasn't that the problem with all the new Battlestars except Galactica in the miniseries? I haven't watched the show in a couple years so my memory is rusty.

2636041 thank you for your constructive criticism, and yes networked computers were an issue. The Alicorn is supposed to be the Pegasus.

2636041 The Pegasus did have networked computers, they were just offline at Scorpia Shipyards.

6318283
Thanks for the reminder, two years after I forgot completely about this story.

6318341
Well, better late than never!

But I heavily suspect this story will remain unfinished forever...

By the way: I looked for stories with "Galactica" and found eight. Zero of these eight stories had been completed yet.
It seems MLP-Galactica is an cursed crossover.

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