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Eight ponies find themselves the only survivors of the wreck of the cruise ship SS Seagallop, stranded on a tropical island. After finding a way off the island, the group get into all sort of adventures involving coconuts, romance and comical mishaps.

Special thanks to Pripyat Pony, Zhooves, Steel Accord, Sterling Crimson, Red Talon, PinkieShyFlutterPie and Budding Night. We all worked together on a roleplay version of this, so without their help, this fanfic would not have been possible. Thanks guys!

Also, special thanks again to Zhooves for the cover art of the fanfic!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 6 )

I really like it so far~
Ye've done a great job with converting our posts to a fic~
I will now proceed to spam these so-called "emoticons" I have heard and seen so much of - to show my appreciation for this.

:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowderp::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::ajsmug::ajbemused::ajsleepy::rainbowwild::raritystarry::raritywink::scootangel::trollestia::yay::twilightsmile::twilightsheepish::eeyup:

I keep trying to favorite it but the site won't let me! :pinkiegasp: Has this ever happened to any of you guys?

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I believe it's because it's not public yet... Or something~

MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I am online! Of course, I have favourited this fanfiction because I am one of the players! Sterling Crimson at your service!:twilightsheepish:

"Canterlot, eh?" Red Talon replied, as he recalling his first professional win at the Canterlot 300. Red loved to race, hence his cutie mark of a chequered flag. "I've been there a few times. The Canterlot racetrack sure is a great track!"

One quick thing DJ. I'm sure you know their's a little rule of "show don't tell." Just spelling out who Red is and why he got his cutie mark is a bit blatant. A better thing would be to describe his cutie mark, and let the audience infer from his that, his speed, and color scheme that he's a racer.

Since we didn't get a chance to name it in the thread, should we call the ship The Dawntrotter here?

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