The spirits of the forest

by Death Moon

Final 2: Love always wins

Iacopo began to walk towards the present rotating the hammer creating lightning frightened by observing the shape-shifter with a gigno left when I notice his friend.
"Look at 'who's here!"
"Run my king! I will try to restrain him, instill are expendable but you have to live because you're the king of my people and only a king can save my subjects! "Said Chrysalis placing itself between the two giants.
"Wait! You mean she is your companion? Well congratulations my friend, you made a good choice! "
"You say you become king of the shape-shifts is a good idea?"
"Of course! as kings your word is law! "said Iacopo putting away his arms staring at the queen.
"Chrysalis you know you can not win against Iacopo, slayer of giants and changes shape! But in order to save your people you prepare to fight against an invincible warrior, now I understand that you think only your people then accept the crown of kings! "Without hesitation and a tricorn wearing the crown and at that time began to Pinkie Pie hopping around to all present.
"Let's have a party to celebrate an engagement with all the ponies pony villas and shapeshifter!"
"Right Cris is free ponies and do not be afraid James is my friend!" Said Garland being obeyed.
The day after Celestia celebrated the marriage of Garland and Chrysalis, who became rulers of Everfree Forest.
"You know my little pony today we all learned that even those who seem evil or cruel often acts for the sake of a few people then believe it is unfair to represent the absolute good!" Said Celestia observing the carriage of lovers run towards the forest while Iacopo away on a flight to his native land.

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Comments

[ADrunkChangeling]

It is obvious that English is not your first language. this story's syntax is strange, and your verb tense is often wrong. You use Italian words instead of English.

You should write in Español, or Italiano until you english improves.

PS: Affollavtevi is "To crowd" in English. Applejack's farm is called "sweet apple acres", not "garden sweet apples".

[Death Moon]

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You guessed it! Only the Regulation prohibits non-English stories so I translated this work into English.
Unfortunately I do to punch and English!

[ADrunkChangeling]

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That sucks. The story sounds really cool. Keep working on your English and you'll make a great English writer!