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Death Moon


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A long time Nigthmare Moon wanted to create life from a star in the sky and now Death Moon, son of Nigthmare Moon, daughter of Princess Luna, you are aroused ready to fight Celestia.

Caution contains a short citation in Past Sins.

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Oh lawdy, another alicorn self-insert fic.


Duck and cover, kids.

3397847

Maybe it's not clear but Death Moon, the protagonist, is a simple unicorn!

No offence, but you REALLY need to work on your grammar and spelling, perhaps you need an editor?:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Coltwing deleted Oct 25th, 2013

A long time Nigthmare Moon wanted to create life from a star in the sky and now Death Moon, son of Nigthmare Moon, daughter of Princess Luna, you are aroused ready to fight Celestia.

No, I'm clearly not ...:facehoof:

"You are aroused and ready to fight Celestia."

Thank you for that image of a Unicom threateningly waving his schlong around at Celestia. Thank you.

Death Moon, son of Nigthmare Moon, daughter of Princess Luna

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3398299

Genderfuid ponies are ponies too. Check your cis privilege.

@tumblrtxt

I will go safe and assume that you are just beginning to learn English.
Keep up your lessons.

Everything happens way too fast. You need to slow down.

3406443

Do not you exaggerating a bit? is a work written in Italian and translated into English.

3407060 That explains the odd wording, though I do have to ask why all of your punctuation is separated from the text on either side...

3407060 I know but the whole plot is just bullshit.(no offense you can like whatever you like)

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