The spirits of the forest

That the legends in the heart of the forest near Ponyville live two giant beings from time immemorial. No one has ever dared to investigate but the time of the myth is over and the truth is going to turn out.

Chapters (7)

the party · 16th May 2013 · 1,211 words
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The meeting with the legends · 23rd May 2013 · 2,065 words
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The stories of the spirits · 19th Jun 2013 · 2,940 words
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The arrival at home · 4th Aug 2013 · 2,339 words
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An ancient threat · 4th Aug 2013 · 3,234 words
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Final 1: The Power of War · 4th Aug 2013 · 412 words
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Final 2: Love always wins · 4th Aug 2013 · 312 words
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ShrimpShogun

ShrimpShogun #1 · May 18th, 2013 · · · the party ·

Wut.

Donute the spartan

Donute the spartan #2 · May 23rd, 2013 · · · The meeting with the legends ·

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ADrunkChangeling

ADrunkChangeling #3 · Aug 9th, 2013 · · · Final 2: Love always wins ·

It is obvious that English is not your first language. this story's syntax is strange, and your verb tense is often wrong. You use Italian words instead of English.

You should write in Español, or Italiano until you english improves.

PS: Affollavtevi is "To crowd" in English. Applejack's farm is called "sweet apple acres", not "garden sweet apples".

Death Moon