Since I can't draw or write stories, I thought that I might still be able to contribute something to the fandom. I think that I'm decent at rhyming, so I made this; the episodes converted into rhymes. I changed the title to something from the comments (Thanks Fenris730). Enjoy.
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Pretty good
Really well done. You should continue with this!!
Essentially, rhymed using couplets, but you split them into four. ABCB rhyme scheme
Good. Very good. Poems are always nice.
I write poems myself! I'm more better at poems, but I really want to upload it. Poems are awesome, but what do you have to do, write a story kind-of poem?
Maybe we can work together, or I can try my own story-poem.
There really should be a category for this.
this is cute.
but the authors note in brackets kind of disrupted the reading...
perhaps you could gather them all at the bottom?
like this:
original: And Spike’s jaw hit the floor(I am not sure about this set, but it sounds okay)
--> And Spike’s jaw hit the floor**
------(the end of the poem)---
**(I am not sure about this set, but it sounds okay)
Just a suggestion
My Little Pony Friendship is magic, As narrated by Zecora
Clever. I would agree with quillsaga that the author's notes should go at the bottom.
When you get to "Bridle Gossip," will you write it in the first person?
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That's interesting. I didn't think about doing it that way. And I don't plan on putting any more brackets. They were only musings in the first place. I should probably move them in the first chapter. In fact, I'll do that now.