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The Escape

“Grrrrrrrrrr” said Zilla. “I must escape!” he exclaimed. Zilla tried everything. From breathing fire to biting and ramming into the magical cage, but he hadn’t tried breaking through the walls. Eventually after beating the cage too many times he collapsed on the ground. While he was collapsed he had the weirdest dream ever. You would not believe what he dreamed of. He dreamed of breaking down the wall... When he finally woke up he rammed into the wall somewhat like 425 times and broke the wall down and escaped...
He escaped while Discord was wreaking havoc everywhere. Discord was making it rain muffins. Of course Derpy ate them all, and when it was chocolate milk rain Pinkie Pie was out there. Discord had taken away Twilight’s and Rarity’s horns. Not only that he had taken away Fluttershy’s and Rainbow Dash’s wings so now they were useless. Zilla asked Discord if he could help him get revenge on 6 ponies by the names of Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie. Discord recognized those names and remembered when Fluttershy reformed him. This caused a bell to ring so Discord attacked Zilla. Zilla didn’t know what was going on so he attacked Discord with all his might. Before Discord was defeated in battle he stopped the havoc and gave everyone there body parts back. As I just said Discord had been defeated and wasn’t able to save his friends. Zilla just said screw Discord I don’t need him. Zilla went on his way to get his revenge, but then he saw Ponyville sirens started going off. These sirens were from the Canterlot Jail and the speakers from there had Celestia’s voice saying Godzilla has escaped, remain calm we will find him soon. Zilla had heard all of this and knew that he would have to hide. He couldn’t find a place to hide so he entered Ponyville and saw those 6 ponies he needed vengeance on. At the same moment he saw royal guards coming into Ponyville so he knew he couldn’t get anywhere without hiding first. He saw the Ponyville dump and decided that it might be good for him to hide there first. The dump was at the edge of town by a big lake that he would soon bathe in. Godzilla got sick of being in the dump all dirty so he went and took his bath. After his bath he felt lonely and turned himself in. Zilla told Celestia that he would be good just like Discord. She didn’t believe him and locked him up in order to keep the citizens of Equestria safe. What they didn’t realize is that they put him in the same cage as before. Zilla was just like “wowwwwww” and walked out the same hole. Luna went to check on him that night, but she saw that the guards had put him in the wrong cage and signaled another search for him. That morning Celestia flew all over Equestria looking for him except the Everfree Forest where no pony dared to go not even herself. She decided to ask Luna to send in the Shadowbolts, but Luna said that she could only summon them when she was Nightmare Moon. Instead Celestia Improvised and sent the Wonderbolts. The Wonderbolts went and were having a great search until they got lost...

Author's Note:

Chapter 3 on the way soon...

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Dartagnen

Dartagnen #1 · Jul 17th, 2013 · · ·

...Well, I think you need a little more spacing between paragraphs, and make the chapters longer, and make people talk more. Also, which Godzilla is this? Is this the American Godzilla from 1999, or Japanese Godzilla? Other than those, it's great.

Wyrme

Wyrme #2 · Feb 13th, 2014 · · ·

WHOAH!!!!!
You be rushing like real cray-cray fast here, boi!
Translation from idiot-ese: Those chapters went waaaaay too fast. You need to slow down, add more details, make them LONGER. Also, you need to work on the story description. It doesn't describe what's going on in the story. Godzilla isn't even mentioned in the description.

Long story short, this needs A LOT of work.

Skylander545

Skylander545 #3 · Aug 15th, 2014 · · ·

Although I would've gone with Zilla Jr and the H.E.A.T. team from Godzilla the series ending up in Equestria. Somehow an inter-dimensional rift would open up causing the team, the Heat Seeker (their ship) and Zilla jr to end up in Manehatten Harbor. But Zilla jr wouldn't show up until later. If you need more information, go on YouTube, or Netflix and look up Godzilla the Series.