Open Computer Database File: Event May 19, 2013
There was a Flash. That was all Doctor Colette Green remembered before she woke up here. She didn't know if she was even still alive. Her friends Doctor Richard Keller & Doctor Gina Cross were with her. They had to find out more about this world if they were going to survive. Even stranger, Colette, Gina, & Richard have had their bodies turned into those of equines.
Join the Black Mesa Hazard Team as they at least try their damnedest to survive in a world where magic & science work together. Will Gina be able to stand a 100% vegan diet? Will Colette manage to execute self-defense with her equipment if need be, despite her lack of hands? Will Richard be able to cope with wing boners? Just a normal day for these fellas.
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Codes and Ponies
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Some rules:
#1 Never use & in dialogue, it just screws with the reader.
#2 All numbers lower than 10 should be written in letters in dialogue. (Just my personal opinion)
#3 Hit Enter before beginning a dialogue, it makes it easier to read, example:
"We got these armaments over the course of our fighting through the invasion we mentioned," said Gina. "We received complete training with everything except the nests from the dedicated training facility at our workplace.
Should be:
"We got these armaments over the course of our fighting through the invasion we mentioned," said Gina.
"We received complete training with everything except the nests from the dedicated training facility at our workplace.
4# All Black Mesa Personnel must be accompanied by the G-Man when performing dimensional travel. Please consult Dr. Freeman for more information. Note that the Black Mesa personal insurance does not cover any damage sustained in other dimensions. Please report to the reception before attempting a reactor meltdown, a resonance cascade or anything else that might cause a dimensional jump and/or an alien invasion.
The Black Mesa research team wishes you the best of days.
2567277 1 & 2: Force of habit from writing a lot of overly long reports & stories.
3: I did it that way because it was a continuation of the same line. Fixed anyway.
4: I imagine the G-Man didn't take that much interest in the Hazard team, since he only appears once in the entirety of Half-Life: Decay. Besides, they're not just in another dimension of their own accord, they were killed by the bomb & forcibly pulled into another dimension when they were resurrected. Something also physically prevented the G-Man from taking an active role in this mess.
2568400 1&2 I can understand that
3# It's a very basic rule of writing dialogue.
Man, this story tries hard, and would make a... passable comedy (Which is about as funny as I can write.) if you made all the interactions as bad as Celestia's introduction. Since this was supposed to be serious, I have to give this a thumbs-down.
A.G.
2810266 I do plan on giving it a rewrite. I wrote chapter 1 at 5 A.M. without getting any sleep beforehand.
2812018
In all fairness that's a rough draft, yet if you want me to edit it for you I can hammer out a price via PM. (Donations to charity always make me feel better.)
A.G.
2840463 A friend on deviantART is gonna help me with it. I also have very good reason for both lack of G-Stallion & the ease with which Gina, Colette, & Richard all come to terms with their situation. Finally, the scene where Richard had a breakdown over not listening to Stanley Rosenberg is gonna be a recurring thing. Postscript: You have played Haλf-Life 1: Decay, right? This story is supposed to cross that over with MLP. I know the Lambda normally replaces the "A" in "Half" in the title, but that's actually wrong. Lambda is "L", not "A".