During, after, and the now, is the story of a Stallion that once loved the great Nightmare Moon. His intention were swell, an engagement to the great mare would be his, but alas it was not. His story begins right when nightmare falls and the beginning of hardship...
Is this supposed to be English?
i might be able to help edit
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i wrote this story in the middle of the night, and i also don't like to consecutively use proper english, so i mix in "ye old english" with the modern. so sorry if its not the best grammar you seen but bear in mind its only just begun, i may go back and re-edit the story making more proper.
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Thanks for the offer, ill be sure to keep you in mind, but i am going try and re-edit this by myself, before i ask for help. thanks for the offer though!
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uhh? Thanks for the warning...I think???
2543606 just pm me if your interested
I this story
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thanks!
2593170 Ur welcome, I can't wait for the rest of it