• Member Since 13th Apr, 2013
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Night Striker


A hockey player from the east coast who enjoys paintball and airsoft. I believe Luna is best pony (Next Spitfire)

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It was just another mission for Delta Operations members Garret, Jacob, and Sam, but when their C-130 was magically teleported into Equestria on a top classified mission what is to happen to them? Will they learn to help Equestria when a new species called The Howlers arrive or will they watch it burn?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 17 )

Any suggestions for the story will be taken into consideration. Nothing to stupid though. So they aren't turning into giant 400 ft. giants etc. Feel free to suggest. :moustache:

Um maybe after the mini horse talks the rest of them come out and like sam explains to them what happen and maybe you should keep going as sam and his two frinds stories.

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I currently have it along the lines of them going into ponyville and nopony being there.
Then a royal guard dies from a small fight. (Don't quote the fight yet it's in chapter 3 and is subject to change) and then have Sam Garret and Jacob split up? I'll think about that one... Ill talk it over with the Jake who brainstorms for me and see what he says. That along the line of what you were thinking?

2518365 Ok..I like helping, even if my suggestion helped or not

Comment posted by Night Striker deleted May 8th, 2013

very good story. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i like it. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! We've been working hard on it, glad you like it.

This STORY ROCK!!!!! I DEAMAND TO SEE MORE!!!! :heart::rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy::heart::twilightsmile::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Thanks! And we are in a bit of a writers block, but don't think we gave up. We just need some time.

DI is Marines
Drill Sargent is Army (Delta Force is within the Army but probably accept soldiers from outside the army):ajbemused::facehoof:

2607690 Sorry we never actually edited that chapter. Thanks for the info, I thought you had to serve X years before you could try out.

ohh i like this already delta boys are badass

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:rainbowlaugh: i can just imagine fast skies now stumbling all over the place and listening to good ol deadmau5 and other things this is great......:rainbowderp: ohhh seriousness coming in i like it

more please. :pinkiehappy:

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Man i wish. hopefully this summer my editor will edit while i'm at work. Damn school.

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